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shiii you may be onto somthing
decent idea, poorly executed, the characters continuously speak mechanically/like walking dictionarys with big words that don't seem fitting for their ages or personalities and over all is just out if place. the story also pretty much just follows the gaangs original journey with little to no deviation despite the inclusion of the mc.
tftc
decent story, kinda sucks that the Mc is the way he is tho, but it's a Chinese Mc so my expectations weren't high to begin with
it's a very good cellar
bruh, at least proof read it, ai is a very useful tool, and can help write chapters when you have a idea but are unsure how to go about implementing it or putting an idea into words. but if your not going to put in the work to make what the ai puts out into a well-done piece of work then your idea, which could have worked, becomes hard to read and or enjoyed when the readers come to read your story.
why do say that?