DrSmoky

Yes everything will be clear in the upcoming chapter

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Well, I really love the novel so far. The card game concept is very unique and fresh. It gives off a vibe similar to Alice in Borderland, which I really like. But the world-building isn’t very strong yet. I hope the author improves that in the upcoming chapters.other from that love it [img=update][img=update][img=update]

It have a vibe of Alice in borderland love it [img=update][img=update][img=update]

Bor love the intro but u should add this in a prologue for proper understanding [img=recommend][img=recommend]

Yeah, I was thinking the same that I should remove the poetic stuff. But then I thought maybe some people are enjoying that poem like style. Still, from the next chapter, I’ll focus only on deep emotions no poetic stuff or over-extended scenes.

I really loved it. Every line touched my heart. I could feel all the emotions. I felt emotional seeing Lucius’s struggles. But I still wonder—why didn’t his mother accept him? If that gets revealed in the upcoming chapters, it would be great. I’m also excited to see what happens between Elara and Lucius. How will Lucius express his inner thought to Elara? Will Elara understand him? I’m really excited to find out.

Wow what a line [img=recommend][img=recommend]

What an emotional rollercoaster! It feels like I’m feeling every emotion deeply.Really love it

What an emotional rollercoaster! It feels like I’m feeling every emotion deeply.Really love it