Freteiro
Brazilian reader here, hi im pobre from Brazil. if I like your MC, be proud of your self because it's very hard for me to like any MCs đ
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the Dao of flirting intensifies
I don't get the reference
such an obvious conclusion, did he really need to use the chip for that?
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I can only imagine Octavius with the appearance of Dr.Octopus
go read or watch the Mahabharata, he is a nasty piece of work
it's enough for you to see if you want to sponsor it or not.
the silver arrows would make more damage no?
constructive criticism, don't use so many "-" dashes. it's really annoying bfor those who use audio reading. and yes I use audio reading, I like to rest my eyes, listen this novels on travels, during gym, driving and while playing stuff...
now he really needs Black Jack
that's the reaction I wanted. thanks [img=recommend]
Freddy Krueger
use of "individual" to many times, you can use, man, person, or even figure if you don't want to say the character's gender. I'm saying become the repetition is kinda distracting, and not very smooth
every time a character takes this breaths, if you use audio reading, you get strange robo sexual noises