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Freteiro

Freteiro

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Brazilian reader here, hi im pobre from Brazil. if I like your MC, be proud of your self because it's very hard for me to like any MCs 😂

2019-03-27 JoinedAscension Island
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro1yr
    Commented

    the Dao of flirting intensifies

    Brother Tai continued, "Listen, Bao, I like fish now. Why do I like fish? Because I like to be with you until death do us part!"
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    I Stayed At Home For A Century, When I Emerged I Was Invincible
    Eastern · Halfway Breeze
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro1yr
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    I don't get the reference

    The second time she simulated Immortal cultivation, she would live until she was 20 years old. Unfortunately, she did not follow the script. If she had shouted "Don't bully girls who are poor" in front of her fiancé, it might have been different.
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    Goddess Helps Me Simulate Cultivation
    Eastern · Goddess Help Me Simulate Cultivation
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro1yr
    Commented

    Poor Ren, he has the Red Lotus disease

    Ch 592 Taking a glimpse of ‘his’ hell [2]
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    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro1yr
    Commented
    Date [5]
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    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro1yr
    Commented

    such an obvious conclusion, did he really need to use the chip for that?

    It was as I deducted. Since the other Ren was another soul, or consciousness, the moment my soul got damaged he took advantage of the situation and appeared. 
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    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro1yr
    Commented

    😏

    It wasn't long before I reached Kimor and mounted him from the top. 
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    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro1yr
    Commented

    I can only imagine Octavius with the appearance of Dr.Octopus

    Just as the match was about to start, Ocatavious felt a small vibration coming from his watch.
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    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro1yr
    Replied to 00_darkness_00

    go read or watch the Mahabharata, he is a nasty piece of work

    Rudra manipulated Karna into feeling indebted to him while he started the conversation as a indebted person willing to return a favour ... The way he manipulated Karna ' s emotions lived up to his in game name of the greatest schemer to ever live on the face of the earth 'Shakuni'.
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    MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master
    Games · Raj_Shah_7152
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro2yr
    Replied to Hudmaster

    it's enough for you to see if you want to sponsor it or not.

    Yua Nakatomi a.k.a PinkLotus
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    MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master
    Games · Raj_Shah_7152
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro2yr
    Commented

    the silver arrows would make more damage no?

    He distanced himself and started using windslash again.
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    MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master
    Games · Raj_Shah_7152
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro2yr
    Commented

    constructive criticism, don't use so many "-" dashes. it's really annoying bfor those who use audio reading. and yes I use audio reading, I like to rest my eyes, listen this novels on travels, during gym, driving and while playing stuff...

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    MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master
    Games · Raj_Shah_7152
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro2yr
    Commented

    me reading this "oh, mc is gonna choose a name from Hindi mythology. it must be Sri Rama!" *_* MC chooses Shakuni. me: "well that should be interesting, ok you have my attention"

    Ch 2 'Omega'
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    MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master
    Games · Raj_Shah_7152
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro2yr
    Commented

    gonna let some chapters accumulate, this is to tense 5 me

    Ch 283 Forsaken [1]
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    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro2yr
    Replied to LuckySilver

    very

    Ch 283 Forsaken [1]
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    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro2yr
    Commented

    now he really needs Black Jack

    That was because the Union had just sold me out. 
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    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro2yr
    Commented

    that's the reaction I wanted. thanks [img=recommend]

    "Boss, I like your makeover. Very badass!" 
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    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro2yr
    Commented

    Freddy Krueger

    "He didn't look like Ren? Then what did he look like?"
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    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro2yr
    Commented
    "Hey, Smallsnake...it's me." 
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    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro2yr
    Commented

    use of "individual" to many times, you can use, man, person, or even figure if you don't want to say the character's gender. I'm saying become the repetition is kinda distracting, and not very smooth

    Staring at the portal that was slowly closing, the grey-suited individual lifted his glasses up with his finger before muttering. 
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    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Freteiro
    Freteiro2yr
    Commented

    every time a character takes this breaths, if you use audio reading, you get strange robo sexual noises

    "Haa..haa...done " 
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    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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