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Shouldn't it be 17?
I liked the pun.
Guys, please stop thanking him and if you want to read the full book from the original author, then visit https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12155794/1/Honour-Thy-Blood. This guy is guilty of plagiarism and keeps on deleting negative reviews saying so
Dude, harem just seems extremely unrealistic in a modern world. So unless you want to mess up this up and fill this story with cringe, don't have a harem.
This is amazing. I have read many black clover fan fictions, but this is the first one not situated in Clover Kingdom. The grammar is great, though has some room for improvement. The conversations don't feel forced at all and the portrayal of characters in canon is spot-on. The character development shown by OC characters is also fantastic. Almost every chapter is funny to some extent. All in all, a great job. Keep it up.
+1
I know he is op, but at least he is slowly developing his own power through his natural talent. The fics I have read contain an elaborate plot, where the descendant of Merlin time travels to the past as a baby, becomes hella op by 11, then comes back to the present and messes with the original plot for kicks. Reading those fics gave me shivers. What you are doing is at least believable and realistic to some extent.
A great book by all means. I have read many fan fictions of Harry Potter but very few pre-canon ones which are actually good. Plus the ones I have read till now always mess up the Merlin's Heir trope and make the character way too op which turns the entire story into nothing but a cringy piece of garbage. Good to know that this one hasn't followed the same path.