KATAKURIROX

An honest review by me. The writing quality while leagues above that of those on this platform, has somehow stayed consistent throughout 250 chapters, not improving in the slightest... not a good sign. Main issue I have is the dialogues. Descriptions are amazing but the dialogues, oh man. Every single character talks the same way. No slang, no vocal tics, no difference in level of vocabulary. Also, the MC glazing, oh good god. I love the guy, but reading how much the others do gives me 2nd hand embarrassment. Also the POV changes. The MC's POV is sometimes 1st, sometimes 3rd, and the other characters are always in 3rd, so why even include 1st? Gets a little jarring. (2 stars) Stability of updates: No issues, consistent as hell. Respect for that. (5 stars) Story Development: I know I'm in the minority, but I enjoyed the romance. Sure some of it seemed nonsense, but I have never seen an author write the ups AND downs of a relationship, not just the former. Also choice of movies was spectacular. Credit where it's due. (4 stars) Character Design: Uh... MC's character is great, complex, multi-faceted, amazing overall. The rest on the other hand... the only other character with any kinds of meaningful development was his bestie, Rihanna was reduced to a caricature of herself, while Jay-Z despite being evil irl, is not a damn Disney villain. Some of the lines made me straight up cringe. And Scarlett's whole personality was reduced to 'female lead'. Though it's early to declare that, she hasn't exactly hit her peak yet so hoping something good down the line. (3 stars) World Background: Good work actually, not much to critique here. (4 stars) All in all, a great work in comparison to the rest on this here website. But nowhere else. There's a reason why your reposting on Questionable Questing ain't garnering the same momentum.

You're finally back! I don't even care it took so long, this fic is way better than your first and the quality difference is night and day!

This is fantastic. I haven't seen a Hollywood novel be written with such fluency of language. Not to mention the plot. Kinda unconventional, but at the same time intriguing.

I am expecting great things from this novel. Though again, I expect them from any novel by Cornbringer. Its practically a habit by this point. Good luck man.

Annabeth

I had my doubts at first about this book. But then I read all the chapters. This is a great book. I don't even know why I had doubts in the first place since it's coming from Knowing Autumn, whose Naruto story is one of the best I have ever read.

This is a good book. Satisfactory for a first attempt. There can be a lot of improvements though. The way the plot has developed, made it seem a bit too easy for a world where child soldiers have a job of killing and capturing. It's great but doesnt deserve 5 stars in my opinion.

This is awesome. No other words to describe it, finally a rich MC who is not hypocritical about his playboy lifestyle and casanova personality.

Shouldn't it be 17?

Bro, you gotta change or photoshop the cover of your book. It shows some korean names as the author and illustrator. Otherwise its awesome.