ritzylord
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ritzylord4mthReplied to ritzylord- ritzylord2yrReplied to priya63Ch 115 Except Dwarves and Nymphs
- ritzylord2yrReplied to Aj_SaundersCh 63 Checking the Haul
- ritzylord3yrReplied to The1TrueJessiah
- ritzylord3yrReplied to WeAreBlank
I just came back but it's a system glitch.
Beasts in this world are very different and unique. There are a wide variety of beast able to kill you in many different ways. From a simple poisonous bite to a fireball thrown at you. To determine the danger of a beast, they are ranked by the mana they emit typically. The rank goes from farm animals to mythical beasts. They're also classed from one to three. With one being the weakest. - ritzylord3yrReplied to priya63Ch 114 Vanille Docks
- ritzylord3yrReplied to Rinolius
Sounds pretty good. P.S. This is a normal suggestion which I'm always taking. This is a reader influenced novel so for the special. People can give even much more drastic event. Still, a naval battle will happen no matter what so don't worry. You can suggest something else if you want.
Ch 113 Keeping Only 5 Platinum Coins - ritzylord3yrReplied to vickyjon
First, he needs to fail. Second, I wanted it to be realistic, and everyone panic. The only difference is professionals know how to control their emotions, not prevent them. Lastly, the door was because he was going for a quick kill. In and out. Plus it had to be his vital error to get him killed.
Ch 1 Another Official, Another Mission - ritzylord3yrReplied to priya63Ch 111 Walking On The Beach
- ritzylord3yrReplied to priya63
Probably, but it'll be hard since it's close to leaving time
Looking at Ritzy, this time she noticed his lips. Her mind was flourished with romantic fantasies. - ritzylord3yrCommentedCh 112 Magic Gauntlets
- ritzylord3yrCommentedCh 107 Hunger For Lust
- ritzylord3yrReplied to sanehumanCh 105 Desired Blessed Noble Guild Ally
- ritzylord3yrReplied to Suck_on_my_bong
The book isn't a joke for me. It's my first novel so of course, it won't be as good as the established authors.
When the last of the mana arrived at the limbs, it caused her body to be at the limit and explode. She lost her life in just a second when he was healing her. - ritzylord3yrReplied to Suck_on_my_bong
She wasn't originally meant to be killed, I just needed to kill Jacky and the little beastkin girl was Ritzy's slave who had to help the maid. I can influence the story, but I won't make it unreasonable. This makes it so I don't always have the choice who lives or dies. I actually had a whole story arc for the beastkin girl but circumstances changed that. Making me throw the whole thing away.
Seeing her cry and her body swelling, Ritzy quickly began placing his hand on her to try and consume some of the mana. Tragically, it was too late. Her limbs swelled so much they exploded like the items Ritzy had before where he had poured too much mana into them.