Loving the story crazy narrating capability.............. .................... ........................... ..................... ................. .. ......................... ........... ........

U got talent my friend!! Keep up the good work

Should i continue this?

extremely unlikely

Word cant explain my disappointment when reading this fiction.The idea itself are kinda good however the writing are really not up to par.The plot are also everywhere and the story does't have a very solid foundation in its making

Its morning here

Mueheheheheh

Oh never mind,its just me ehhehehhehe

sorry for some lack of spaces between words.i don't know how to fix it

it's never stated that Limulus likes guys tho.Hurray for no romance

Cheers for no harem and yuri!!

Dropped?

Sleep well you deserve it

Keep up the good work

No romace is best romance!!! I support!!!!

Please no romance too.even yuri is unacceptable.most yuri are really forced and disturb the flow of the story.so yeah no romance or yuri please

how dare he have such thought toward our favorite beloved salted fish

lumian are not even that intelligent,how can he outwit amon.hunter pathway give him a bit of upgrade in intelligent however even medici is afraid of amon.

If your writing skill improved greatly u can consider writing novels on royalroad.its where good novel are written unlike wn.u also would't get 1 star review just because ur mc a girl or any stupid reason like on wn.most review are quit fair and really good.it show that the reviewer actually read and try to understand the story

not gonna lie,i can't see lumian gang of thug,surpass klain gang of angel in anyway