haha no worries >~< Im glad it made ya happy

The story has a good vibe to it. At first it would seem like your basic clichés but the story soon picks up the pace with mysteries and such. It is a pleasant read but at the same time it keeps you on the edge of your seat. I like how original you were with names because names can totally change the vibe of a character and that really matter. Although the story is really good I would like to ask the author take help in proofreading the chapters. The story is nice but has silly mistakes in paragraph spacing and stuff. But no worries! its a basic issue with all authors haha I do that too. KEEP UP THE GOOD Work💕

Yes, I really do appreciate you pointing my mistakes :D I will make sure to keep the things you pointed out in my mind when I write. Thank you for taking out the time for reading it and giving your opinion on it. Good with your book too! I will make sure to continue reading it when I get time haha 💕

thank you😭 I'll to keep the updates constant as much as possible 💕

im just gonna sit and sip my tea

For a prologue it really sets the mood. I really like how strong the symbolism is in this chapter. Idk why I felt like I opened someone's diary and read their thoughts about the world haha

thank you💕

and yeah, I do need a proofreaders 😂 Im so lazy to proofread my own work oof. I asked a friend to help me, she said she will right away when she gets free

i appreciate your input! I will keep the things you said in mind. Im glad you like that you like the plot so far. :)

Thank you, I really appreciate it! I would update more frequently but Im quite busy and usually down with health issues .---. I'll post the next chap asap :D thank you for always reading!

yeah- I still haven't got around to proofread it. oops!

Its an interesting start, it totally sets the mood and makes you curious as to what actually happened. At the same time it gives you a rough idea of how bad mankind can be. It gives off that edgy vibe and I love it haha XD Its structured well :D

thank you for your input :D I wish ask a friend to help me in proofreading and keep the story going!