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Gracias por continuar la historia siempre se agradecen las historias con humanos de protagonistas.

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Sin duda es un personaje muy turbio como para que se quede así.

Gracias por actualizar, buen capítulo, me agrado la conversación con bulma sobre su vida.

Bueno nunca lo culparía por deter un bandido obviamente asesino, por cierto debería hablar con bulma sobre esos arrebatos de ira irracionales, es el tipo de cosa que causan problemas en las relaciones, sospecho que muchas de las acusaciones de Bulma fueron fácilmente cosas pequeñas que escalaron rápidamente por culpa de esos arrebatos emocionales.

Hasta ahora la historia ha sido genial no veo como podría estar mal, gracias por avisar.

Gracias por publicar, muy buena historia.

Un poco interesante pero pasa el texto por un corrector ortográfico.

where is yamcha?

Napa's power should be around 7k to 8k for him to force goku to use kaioken to defeat him

His power is too low, especially since they used the gravity chamber, he should have about 4k or 5k enough to make napa sweat a bit, but lose because he's alone.

I hope you keep your character as human by growing him in interesting ways instead of the repetitive transformations of sayan.

and yamcha? I was hoping you would give him tough love so he would stop being a bad character and have a redemption arc and growth.

thanks for the chapter

Good premise, please don't change the race, develop it as a human.

I did it, but it didn't work directly, from the cell phone it's difficult, can you link it from a comment?

I can't open the video

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even in the change there is value, in the series it is not seen that the human warriors change their training styles and insist on the paths that have kept them stagnant since the Sayan saga, they do not change their strategy, they are brave but too traditional to be able to stand out , Krillin and Yamcha invented techniques but after making a good one they stopped creating new things.