Whargen

So, this is just my honest review here. The story and the premise has potential. However, the grammar, along with how the sentences are structured in the story, makes reading it a bit of a challenge. Personally, I'd recommend you use Grammarly or an AI to help polish your story, to make it more readable and cohesive to the audience. Also, if you don't already, get yourself a proof-reader (Or sometimes known as a Beta-reader) to proof read your chapters before release. Overall, I love the idea and hope you continue it. But I'd really like to see this story become polished so it can be perfectly enjoyed :)

2 years late, but for those overweight within a certain frame, you can still enlist into the army and navy thanks to their new programs allowing so. They’ll also help get you to the bare minimum in order to enlist if you don’t meet the requirement. Helped me out a lot, almost lost enough to get into the navy now.

What the absolute hell did I just read here. How in the hell, do you not know that America / USA is a country. To the one saying continent, USA is a part of the North American Continent.

Death! I have come to bargain!

What in all that is unholy…

Am I first? Interesting.

Now, I HAVE to mention. Previous Marvel x DC crossovers that have been made on this site have not been that good. BUT, based on how you chose her powers, I have some hope that this fanfic will be pretty good. I hope that remains the case.

While true the spartans did have slaves, they did not use them at the battle of 300. (At least according to what is currently known) There were 300 spartans, some athenians, thebans and one or two others. Yet on the third day before the final battle Leonidas had all the others leave except for the spartans.

Unpopular opinion: I wouldn’ mind being genderbent if I’m sent to a new world. To me, If im going to a new world with new powers and experiences I’d want to experience life on the other side so to say