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Bet I'm uploading The edited chaps for 1-24 this week
He doesn’t necessarily know at this point in time but he knows that everyone he’s was hiding info he just didn’t know whether they didn’t know anything or if it was a genjutsu keeping them from speaking
Rewriting chaps 1-24 just for this reason, I believe things could’ve went different
Fam imagine you're playing a game and you create a character… that's the same exact way I make my mcs .. This man exists and u talking bout it doesn't make sense
Shamelessssssss review by the one and only! I have a couple things I want to point out now. -no harem -alternate universe/timeline -op chars/mc although the skill gap in each rank is greatly higher potential, let’s say a genin before is equal to mid-high chunin or low jonin level -Slower buildup until about chapter 50, I plan on writing a lengthy novel so I decided the foreshadowing was worth going into -be my best/worst critic, it makes me a better author ! -the system progression is sloppily planned but once I rewrite the first arc everything will make sense in the long run
I’m rewriting the first chapter to recreate the vision I had in a much less lazy way , for new readers chapters 1-25 are small once you get close to the second arc everything is 1k+ words. I’ve already managed to pass my first goal of reaching the next arc, so I’m going to be going back to the usual schedule of 1+ chapter a day. Since I have reached my goal I am now changing my focus back to my original story to embark on my route to becoming an author
So kaguya isn’t planned to come in the upcoming arcs, if I do implement her best believe it’ll be far greater 😂
Nosir not as of now, I do know I want Zuno to have kids. I feel like harem waters down the story.. kinda as if it’s too much fan service and extra words just to meet word count