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why do they keep calling yu xiaogang "brock" this isnt pokemon
the explosion worm martial soul is useless i think im dropping this one
the name of his fire magic changed again.....
more likely lamp oil
it wouldn't have been kakashi he'd entrust matters to he wouldn't even have been born yet...
lord of wrong names
there were only ever a few notable uchias to begin with
bah based on the characters he chose this is gonna suck
too much skipping around and too much cutsie childlike behavior it makes it agonizing to read especially the dragon
why is it all they eat in this au is mashed potatoes
using his full name constantly just shows the author doesn't know what he's doing makes ever sentence sound weird
i didnt know uncle Vernon was a Weasley
it was pretty good until recent chapters where the mc wants to make pokemon.....something about that makes this whole thing seem mid
the fusion power in the original was better
got malfoys name wrong...... Macmillan
mc name is so stupid that alone is making me wanna drop it
danzo is the culprit
is it just me or is this sounding suspiciously like Eminence in Shadow next youll tell me his ultimate move is "I Am Atomic"
10year ring is stupid
keep saying looks like this no images or place to find em