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FirstHumanWolf4mthReplied to VentallionThere is one by the name of `Interesting Times`. Honestly, the best Mass Effect fanfic I have read.
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Tina*
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Will always be*
Pokemon Eggs are always will be the same Pokemon as their Mother. Because Gardevoir is the mother of The Pokemon Egg, the child automatically becomes a Ralts. - FirstHumanWolf1yrCommented
If i'm not wrong, naruto stopped using substitute jutsu. Because of Sasuke's rinisaringan ability. And it's to OP.
[A/N : Battles are hard to write… Especially when you consider jutsus like Body Flicker and Substitution. Anyways, the first actual fight that I wrote. Lemme know your thoughts.] - FirstHumanWolf1yrCommented
Congrats
[A/N : The fanfic has crossed 100k words!] - FirstHumanWolf1yrCommentedCh 53 Chapter 52 : Up a Few Notches
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Salam means "peace" actually.
I head to the pavement while saying Salam (hey) to the butcher's son in their shop next to the building entrance. - FirstHumanWolf1yrCommented
Tax for chapter and yes, pleas do share your findings.
Long-time no see guys. The reason for my absence was that I *cough* got lost on the path of life. I absolutely did not find a lot of good fanfics that I had to read. *sagely nods* - FirstHumanWolf1yrCommented
Shouldn't the minimum age for chakra unlocking be 5?
"lecture! shouldn't we be unblocking our chakra nodes" - FirstHumanWolf1yrPosted
The plot is good so far. Mc personality is also decent. The background building is not at the same level but, there might not be much to say when the village is in a desert. The trio's friendship is refreshing and not stiff......I am not very good at writing reviews so that's all I have. Hope this motivates you to write more author.
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If this is the case why does the MC want to take over root? and use Zabuza as his eyes and ears.
Orochimaru has always thirsted for eternal life but he doesn't know what he wants to do when he gets it. During and after the 4th ninja war he saw that even though Kaguya and other Otutsuki live for almost thousands and millions of years, they still aren't satisfied and were still greedy for something or the other. He understood that once he gives in to greed, there is no stopping it and maybe one day even he will end up like someone who wants everything the world has to offer and still be unsatisfied. - FirstHumanWolf1yrCommented
Thank you for writing this. This shows that MC is not just a calculativ person but someone who cares about others.
Yami stood up and saw himself drenched in sweat. For a second, he didn't know why but the thought of Itachi came to his mind. He needed to find a way to have Tsunade heal Itachi. If Yami waits for too long then Itachi's lung disease might become incurable. He might have not personally lived as Yami at the start of his life but after fusing with the memories, he felt as if this was the life he lived. Yami may be cold and ruthless but if he can't protect those who care about him and who he cares about then what's the use of all that strength. It just becomes a meaningless struggle. Like the one, Orochimaru is in. - FirstHumanWolf1yrCommented
Is that a good idea??
'Danzo you can't even hide the greed and hatred in your eyes. I don't want to kill you and eradicate your root...I want to destroy each and every plan of yours and take over root for myself.' - FirstHumanWolf1yrCommentedCh 18 Interesting Times - Chapter 18
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