Either this one or the Third

I agree love this and I thought she was female too??

Nice job keep em coming👍

Could be a bit AU, but I understand where you are coming from. Keep in mind the whole franchise can be a bit lore extensive and confusing. Anyway I think it's good for a first novel and good criticism will always help hammer out the kinks. Anyway good job I like the general direction and the background!!!

Hey Purcle!! I just wanted to ask if you are going to continue with this, or you were just refrencing trying to upload this before and it woudn't let you? Regardless I absolutely love the idea and hope you do!!! I wish you much luck with this and will gladly be an avid reader of yours and any other ideas (strories) you come up with. Thanks!!!

Hey I didn't know where to ask this so hopefully you don't mind. I was going to ask if you can try another go at writing that "Reborn as Caulifla" fic you wrote before?? Please with a cherry on top!!! Again sorry for writing this on another post.