Takanima

Wanda

Tftc and it's Hina not Tina

Wrong chapter, 97 instead of 57

Good chapter

We're really starting to stray from the comics here, and I really like how it's evolving. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see everything he'll learn from Jocaste Nu

Ruamoku

Good chapter, I really like what you do with Vader, I can't wait to read the rest of the story

Good chapter, I can't wait to see how he's going to modify his armor like we've never seen in the comics despite the fact that Palpatine told him to change it as he wants

A great beginning, I hope you'll find inspiration to continue the story. Generally, Star Wars stories on web novels are often abandoned after a few chapters. I can't wait to read the rest.

So far, it looks almost exactly like the comics, but the small differences make things really interesting. I hope we'll really see the role of the essence in the next chapters.