Dumb_Racoon
I like racoons.
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I would my dude. Once we get to monster association arc. fufufu~🤭Also, thanks for reading!
It's done my dude. Do you have anymore suggestions?🤔 I wanted to improve my writing so I thank you for pointing that out.😌
I see🤔 Thanks I'll add a bit more detail.
Thanks🤔 I'll edit those now I guess. All of it.
Oh and yeah I edited my story now! But I guess you won't be reading it now still I am happy to have you as my first reviewer, even though you are a bit rash to someone who wrote his first fanfic. Any newbies would already be dismayed by this sort of treatment yet I'm different so I'mma write 2 chapters on this day. The first 5 chapters was supposed to be my rough draft which I impulsively published. I hope you understand that if you actually ever cared. The reason I called you a troll is that in every review you made it seemed to offend and disrupt me from writing my novel when I am in a state of letting my ideas flow, revisions can be made later.
Still I would follow your example I guess it's my first time writing something so I'm bound to get something wrong, thanks for pointing it out!
Have you ever called your mother mommy? Bro...does this mean you cringe when you call your mother mommy? it seems you hate your mother and that's not my problem bro.
So this is what a troll is like huh?🤔 My first time experiencing it but somehow it really motivates me to write more and more chapters🤩 There are already 64 as of now adding this to their library and I'm happy at that thought unlike you who seemed to have raging hormones and tried to read a bit and leave, the backstory for my MC is a trope and it shows how he has progress with his life that would help him understand the perspective of being a gang leader and a cop also a politician.🤔 So idk why you would judge my english too when it is my 3rd language and also writing for me is a learning experience and now that you've told me this, I feel even motivated to write more chapters🤩 Also, your english sucks too.
He doesn't have a mother figure in the past, bro have you even read the whole chapter 1? He was abused and threatened to be thrown out at the sea if they don't have any money that would feed their whole family🤔 I'm not even angry at you cuz you just pointed out something you hated and I really like how you told me about your perspective, thanks for letting me know😌
I know that's why he wanted to perfect it for his son, also he didn't have any support from the government or any money. He is alone in making a serum like that so I don't know why you think he would get a fast regeneration by drinking a low tier enhancing serum🤔
It's vital to the story.
Lol🤣
I see... I should deffnitely edit that thing out🤔
Well, I don't know the specifics there so I just kinda thought that basic math could be hard for babies to even know what it is, also it's called memorization. He already knows how to count and his mother just makes him recount it.