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Thanks for the chapter, but we really need some character development - outside of abilities. I feel no connection with any of the characters. It's just 'MC has OP abilities, and he wants women to admire him even though he's not going to do anything to them'. I mean... This chapter was a 3 month time skip. Does he just keep stringing all these girls along? I understand that this is an anime world, and in DM, women won't care about that, but it's still frustrating for someone looking to read an actual story, and not a long description of a status sheet.
That's a serious medical condition!
Most women are.
Going after the cute werewolf that would never get involved with Adventurers. Bold move, Cotton.
The story has slowed down significantly, to the point that it isn't enjoyable anymore. After forcing us to sit through the Gungans, we're still not really going anywhere. You need to get this moving a bit, because too much stagnation is the death of a story - especially one that's supposed to be full of action.
Clementine, Clementine! Oh how you shine! Your love, and my love, have got to combine!