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Whiteout2mthCommentedThatās sooooo cringeeere!!! āThis is ISEKAIIā šš„“š¤®
"You think this is still school? This is isekai, and here, I could kill you without any teacher stopping me!" Roger flexed his shoulders, advancing towards Owen.detailSchool Transmigration: I, Chosen as the Saint by Dragons at the StartFantasy Ā· Sesame_Cookies- Whiteout4mthReplied to Galanteo
A fantastic piece so far, I think the pacing is neat and well structured, balancing life inside and outside of the game, much like a book Iām writing myself on another account scheduled for next year, plus this story has minimal grammatical errors, a level headed protagonist and a structured world building experience on both worlds.
"Don't worry, Uncle Ben, with great power comes greater responsibility - just like what you said," Leon replied. - Whiteout7mthReplied to NovaCorp
Itās on a ship š¶š¾
The Battle continued for 30 whole minutes, and with each second the battle got more and more intense, more bystanders died, around 30 men wearing Black Suits were lying on the floor with blood coming out of their bodies. The entire Hall room reeked of irony smell of blood. - Whiteout7mthReplied to Relz
I donāt blame him, the bigger question is why is the waitress taking so long to put in the order? š¤·š¾āāļø
Ye Xingchen furrowed his brow and impatiently said, "Enough with the nonsense. Bring the food!" - Whiteout11mthReplied to Habib_Haji
Itās an average so itās correct
"Fuck!" King Yama couldn't help but swear, "What did that kid do in his last life? How could he have such bad luck in his early 20s? I remember when Hitler was killed by a car after his reincarnation, he only lost more than 50000 points. He's only in his 20s, and how could he have more than -80000 points? Was he Hideki Tojo in his last life?" - Whiteout1yrReplied to Laron_Shawn
The confusion is mutual
"Wow boss has a child" - Whiteout1yrCommentedCh 12 It's Just You and Me
- Whiteout1yrReplied to Whiteout
Like itās just too forced
"get to the point, if you don't have anything to say then don't waste my time". - Whiteout1yrReplied to Sir_Squirrel
Iāll be real his hatred or disdain for Arthur is to compensate for the lack of ideas.
"get to the point, if you don't have anything to say then don't waste my time". - Whiteout1yrCommentedCh 30 We meet Again
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You actually made me laugh for a bit there mate šš
"Alright then, let's part on good terms." - Whiteout2yrCommented
I dont think anyone realizes that this is the first clear and clean sentence in the book YET!!
Peter :" It's true I like you, but I always thought that it is not right to you Felicia, try to understand if you fall in love with me you will also have to take care of Alice and I don't want to burden you with responsibilities. you have your whole life ahead of you." He put his head down not daring to look at her eyes. - Whiteout2yrCommented
And the reality is that they are gold diggers!!
This was not gold-digging, but reality. - Whiteout2yrReplied to malodias
This had me dying šš¤£š
"Yep, I'm screwed. I think I will have better chances of learning how to fly by moving my arms." - Whiteout2yrReplied to Queen_Of_Alchemy
Took the words out of my mouth ššš
You obtained 01 status points. - Whiteout2yrCommented
If you can, change ādriveā to ārideā to fit the era
After withdrawing the reins, Kotter Harlan shrank the distance between him and the carriage and reported respectfully, "Master Locke, it's only half an hour's drive away from Lister. It will take about an afternoon to reach your castle." - Whiteout2yrCommentedCh 42 Round Two with "God"