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MrGodlyGod013 months agoReplied to nunya_business_34You're right this will be fixed
This paragraph has been deleted.- MrGodlyGod013 months agoReplied to QuirkyEditor_3142
This is a Lana Lang that left Clark because of the secrets and lies. she simply wants full transparency, not to mention she simply cares
- MrGodlyGod017 months agoReplied to Bigbowser007
I can't tell you how to feel about the characters. Lex can seem passive he has the answers but he doesn't do anything with them. that's because he refuses to let fear make the decisions for him. I didn't realize it earlier while writing this story but he won't judge Lana for what she might do. Destiny is something he's currently fighting against hers isn't set in stone. Don't judge her for what you think she might do, she'll make her mistakes, and she'll learn. Just as Lex will, because this story has growth. At least I think it does, disliking the characters is fine. We can all tell what kind of character Lana is if we look at superhero stories. the hero always gets the girl, but is Lex the villain of this story?
- MrGodlyGod012 years agoCommented
Well Done!
- MrGodlyGod012 years agoReplied to DogmaticNonsense
There are a couple of reasons for the rapid growth. One I was likely reading or watching something that had a similar plot point. But that doesn't mean there was no thought behind my decision. Two, I needed the Lycan transformation to mean something. To differentiate Lycans from Werewolves. Elias was originally supposed to go through three transformations. Right now he's the equivalent to a cub in Lycan standards. I could go on and on. I implore you to go about sharing your opinions in a more positive manner. Looking at your comment history you succeed in breaking authors/ stories down but rarely attempt to build them back up. What's the point in only sharing your negative opinions?
- MrGodlyGod012 years agoReplied to DogmaticNonsense
join the discord and we'll have an actual conversation
- MrGodlyGod012 years agoReplied to DogmaticNonsense
Maybe no, except you said most people which means that some do? Have you observed every person with those qualities? No? Well I guess you don't have the credentials to critique a fanfic that uses it as a plot device.
- MrGodlyGod013 years agoReplied to RUZS
bro lol this is never going to be updated. instead check out my collection of short stories ja al ghul will interest you
- MrGodlyGod013 years agoReplied to CCAAPP
Swolson?
- MrGodlyGod013 years agoReplied to SlumpiiZednem_947
not dropped just busy with college. sorry
