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Funny as always. Thanks for the chapter, author :)

I like your story, and the way you flesh out the world and the characters. Please continue writing it, any way you want, and ignore those that hate having the story deviate from the original one. If they want to see that one, they can play the game again :)

I love your story mr Author. Please write any way you want and ignore those mean comments. If they want to read the cannon story, they should play the game again. Your AU is fantastic, and you are fleshing it well :)[img=recommend]

Your story is awesome, with every chapter bringing something interesting, fun, fleshing the characters or building the world. Please continue writing it :)

Nice chapter. Also, that "stone in tree" idea is like the one from "A Third Path to the Future" fanfic, which is nice :)

Vegeta uses the spirit sword in Dragon Ball Super manga, chapter 38 :)

Very good writing, nice jokes, good plot, likeable character. Please continue writing this ---------------------------------------------------------------- :)

First review Not bad. The grammar can be worked on more, and some parts of the story are a bit exaggerated, but the premise is good and I will continue reading it, as I like what you've done until now.

Nice story. Worth a read. The way that the MC plans these merciless things, and the way the other characters are portrayed is awesome. :)[img=recommend]

Thanks for the chapter. Please continue writing such an amazing story. :)

All I can say is that, this story is awesome. The way you portray your character, their actions, the reactions from the other characters, how they think, feel is amazing, and I wish more stories were like yours. Please continue creating such an amazing peace of literature. :)

Pretty promising. Do you need a Beta for the chapters? :)