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Our MC should start uniting the other houses in hogwarts then conquer the British wizards then rule all of the European Wizards, but to make sure his power is kept in check have the American, Indian, and Japanese etc.magic users still give him trouble so it can still be interesting.
Okay boys hear me out. The iwa and the kiri village are the only two who know the mine exists. So the smart thing to do would be to give kiri 20% and iwa takes the rest because the mine is on iwa lands all the Kiri ninja have to do is keep their mouths shut.
Hey I have been here since when you wrote chapter 13. Whether you continue or not, know that I really enjoyed the story and liked how you took the reader’s opinion on what they want and made sure to consider all of them fairly. As always great job.
Hear me now brothers, how can we give Baldur a mortal women that’s a cruel move. Cause even if he can make his woman live longer her sense of time is different so it would be painful for Baldur’s mortal girl to watch everyone she knew die yet. That’s why I believe the suggestion should be of women who live for a long time like HELA BWAHAHAHA
But she is Baldur’s sister who was punished by Odín. He shouldn’t want to control but to push her back on the right path. Hela was loyal to Asgard and loved it to the extreme. If not for Odín who ordered her to conquer the other realms for him, and when he felt she became too powerful he sent the Valkyries to capture her. So Hela is simply been forced down the wrong path and when she accepted it out of love for her home. She was seen as a villain for doing exactly as Odín commanded.
Who needs disguises few would mess with the warlike Asgardians and if it’s just the three princes so long as they don’t go to far and Odín doesn’t get involved . The other empires will just see it as Baldur and his brothers trying to gain some battle experience and won’t declare war. More likely they will just try to hunt the princes themselves.