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Kal123451yrCommenteddon't rewrite but improve upon the problems you found so that story doesn't lose it's flow
I don't know what you guys think about this novel, but after re-reading this novel from the beginning twice, I feel that this novel is very messy, and I also found a lot of errors in this novel, especially starting from Volume 2. In addition, I've thinking about it for days, but I can't find any solutions to fix everything, unless I rewrite this novel. And now, I want to ask you guys. Should I delete the existing chapters and rewrite them from scratch like Xia Tian? Or should I create a new novel like Ling Yun?- Kal123451yrCommented
Why no create a chaos cultivation technique for zhang fei which combines all elements, physics, and bloodline
Do you guys have a suitable cultivation technique name for each element. - Kal123451yrCommented
Stop adding viscount to boot in every sentence
Mind you, Nux was a 2 times Virgin, this bit of a simulation was enough for him to climb to cloud nine, especially when the one doing it was such a beautiful milf and a viscount to boot. - Kal123451yrCommentedCh 182 Shocking the crowd
- Kal123451yrCommentedCh 181 Danger again
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I like that fanfic more than this but you are releasing chapters inconsistantly for that
● Author: I'm working on another fanfic "Reverend Insanity: Unmatched", I will be glad if you try to read it. - Kal123451yrCommented
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vote: Should I change Acelynn's name to Anna? - Kal123453yrCommentedCh 117 Searching The Outer Court
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It’s clark...bloed is in science/magic
"Mr. Bloed, it's time for the last battle." A servant approached me and informed me with a respectful look. - Kal123453yrCommentedCh 116 Q & A
- Kal123453yrCommentedCh 294 A Shocking Entrance Test (2)
- Kal123453yrCommentedCh 478 First Round