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Shinnanju1yrReplied to Cheese_curdles- Shinnanju2yrReplied to QuailTheSage
Yes, but this is a heavy one designed for colder weather.
When he finally noticed the days getting shorter, he realized he needed to prepare clothing for cold weather. He wasn't sure how cold it would get so he considered it would get very cold and planned accordingly. In addition to the bedding and blanket he had; he made a heavy fur-lined cloak with hood. He also made simple mittens, which were basically socks for hands, and over-boots to go over his boots and halfway up his calves. - Shinnanju2yrReplied to Lazy_Chicken_God
- Shinnanju2yrReplied to KwiitsoputCh 123 "Wasted!"
- Shinnanju2yrReplied to Cheese_curdles
Yeah, I see what you mean. I had to compromise though. I still wanted two sentences so instead I wrote, "I hardly used any force at all."
This paragraph has been deleted. - Shinnanju2yrPosted
Hi, this is Shinnanju, the author. I just wanted to let you all know that I know the first few chapters are kinda rough. There's a reason for that and it'll rear its ugly head (much) later down the line. I read comments, and if there's something I got wrong, or missed, please leave a comment and I'll go back and fix it. I write the book offline and upload them as I finish, and I just recently (1/11/22) learned that I missed a chapter (Chapter 34: "Testing!"). I've uploaded it and put it in the correct place as of today, so if you've already read and skipped that chapter, you can go back to read it if you want. I hope you all enjoy the adventure!
- Shinnanju3yrCommentedCh 187 Team
- Shinnanju3yrCommentedCh 1 Interview With A Legend
- Shinnanju3yrReplied to AnWan
I'm not sure if you have had many people say this to you or not, but the grammar needs work, and I am willing, if you allow it, to go back to chapter 1 and edit this for you. I will also update your glossary with terms, levels, characters, locations, whatever you want. I find this to be an interesting novel, and I believe that it draws enough attention with the number of chapters written to gather fans, however people who start to read this may get frustrated and drop it before the grammar improves.
- Shinnanju3yrCommented
Saya mentioned that the owner would send dark vine eaters after him, so the ones in the sewers have a direct relationship to whatever is in the basement. The creature in the basement is either the cause or the effect of the situation with the ducal family. Or both. The grim rats and toxic grim rats existed prior to the problem, if they evolved to the dark vine eater, it could have mutated and caused the problem with the family, which then used the evolved rat, further enhancing it to control the dark vine eaters. Well, dem's my thots.
Ch 170 I will smoke out the mastermind - Shinnanju3yrCommentedCh 67 Space Realm 3
- Shinnanju3yrCommented
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"Fuck fuck fuck!" I cursed out loud, I fucking entered this spatial realm and an unstable one at that, after cursing few minutes, I calmed myself. - Shinnanju3yrCommented
"damage *deals* damage to him"
Levin Cloud started buffing his teammates except Creepysoo because holy attribute damage delas damage to him rather than healing him. He learned this earlier when they were practicing their teamwork. Creepysoo even started burning as he was immolated but the young boy thought that he suddenly got fire powers. - Shinnanju3yrCommented
I tried copying that link to the YouTube video, but I'm unable to due to WebNovel preventing it (I guess to prevent stealing content). I started to type out the link, buuuuttt.. I lost focus. If you could just tell me what to look for in YouTube, I'd greatly appreciate it. [img=recommend]
Ch 91 A Unique Greater Demon - Shinnanju3yrCommented
I may get some flack from this, but the cornea is the clear part of the eye that protects the iris from damage. It is the area where contact lenses are placed to correct vision. I believe that the area the author wanted to be red is the sclera, which is the white portion of the eye.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Shinnanju3yrCommentedCh 99 Forest of Traps
- Shinnanju3yrCommentedCh 81 Forming a Core
- Shinnanju3yrCommented
Was he running away or not?
Instead of running away, Satel was now actively running away, since they now actually had the power for it. Eisen and Satel clashed for a while, until a couple more minutes passed. The gap was the same length as the other two inbetween the 'Runes of the Nine Circles', as Satel started to cast the next one directly after inflicting a heavy wound upon Eisen that the old man had to heal if he didn't want to die. - Shinnanju3yrCommentedCh 709 Runes of the Nine Circles, Part 2