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DRAMA QUEEN!!!!
Why don't you open a "tea house"? as a Hyuga, and begins to "hire" genin ... to become the "boss" of him. You know with the following graduates, who happen to be the heirs of his clans, it could lay a basis for his political power in Konoha. Also, he should hire Lee and Tenten, so they are not deadlifts ... with the MC coming to Jonin long before the Chunin exams, when Lee barely got to Chunin at the Canon. Not to mention to Tenten that he only dropped weapons at a distance ... Also with Lee's training he could strengthen the MC.
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I've been watching ExE ... and their world is screwed up, a god kills Great Red easily ... they have advanced technology ... He should make plans to stop Rizevim Lucifer from declaring war on ExE and sending the location of the world to him. He should go and meet Tiamat before she becomes Ajuka's subordinate. She would be closer to him, since she has a certain relationship with Ereshkigal. Tiamat could be OP with training. Including Crom Cuach in his kingdom, he is an evil but honorable dragon, who trains his body to the extreme. Also to "repair" Samael, so that he can return to heaven. Giving his territory closer to Los Angeles. And investigating his dragon venom. Get Fenrir to study his ability against gods, to add him to Enkidu. Also Ingvild Leviathan with her ability, would be a good choice for the nobility of Serafall. Although he was not born yet. Will he save his mother Lilith? I also remember that you were going to include Quetzalcoatl ... Includes "Candles" from Harry Potter. You know so they can "have fun".
By writing about a goddess who can intervene however she wants, you are creating a "Deus ex machina" that will destroy the coherence and logic of your story. That is to say: The MC is about to win after a thousand chapters where he struggled and suffered, but the goddess comes and loses ... This is why many stories where a ROB or God interferes with character development tend to be abandoned as they become absurd. Eliminate outside meddling that adds nothing to the story.
He does not have a bond with Kurama. He already said it if he had come at another time he would have killed Sakura. He's not Naruto ... I am 100% in agreement with his actions. He should seek an opportunity to absorb the Kama that is in Sasuke's body ... to obtain the full inheritance of the sage of the six paths.
Hello great that you came back since I love this story. You could research on the planet «RAXUS PRIME» as far as lei is a 'garbage' planet but it has a supercomputer with advanced artificial intelligence (something very rare in Star Wars), as well as a Sith artifact called "harvester" that extracts energy from the dark side , Count Dooku uses it.
Make it OP, to be honest this story is +18 ... I doubt readers are here to see his heartbreaking story on his way to power ... they're here to read lemons ...