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JustABeginner1yrReplied to hhhhz45Your review confuses me and I'm the author. After the Wiki dump explaining the branches of Grisha, the story is pretty original with some tie-ins to the series. But the story is set years before the start of the canon and will be considered AU, like the production of Jurda Parem years ahead of the canon. You can't read half a chapter and assume the rest.
- JustABeginner1yrReplied to hhhhz45
Yes. it is. once the info introduction is over, the story begins. Not everyone knows the series and its convenient to explain all the branches to understand the oddity of the MC's existence.
Tailors are Grisha of the Corporalki order who have the ability to change a person's appearance. Tailors were once considered rare and special; however, in Ravka, tailoring is now taught to all Corporalki students of the Second Army. - JustABeginner1yrReplied to HarukiSensei
No. The next installment just got all tangled up and Im working to unravel it. I have rough drafts that need to be refined. And the next arc is a bit of a complicated one. But I already started and I'm dedicated to the Magi world, so... yeah.
Ch 11 Chapter V: Secrets of Bala (2) - JustABeginner1yrCommented
Qin Yuechi
While Qin Yuechi was now a young white-haired beauty with cherry lips and alluring golden eyes, Xiao Ya had become a woman with Vermilion features. Hair as dark as night and a flame mark upon her brow. Bow-shaped lips and sharp eyes with red flecks, Her body was curvy with a buxom chest and round ass. Still maintain a rather slim frame that gave her an hourglass look. - JustABeginner1yrCommented
Xiao Ya
While Qin Yuechi was now a young white-haired beauty with cherry lips and alluring golden eyes, Xiao Ya had become a woman with Vermilion features. Hair as dark as night and a flame mark upon her brow. Bow-shaped lips and sharp eyes with red flecks, Her body was curvy with a buxom chest and round ass. Still maintain a rather slim frame that gave her an hourglass look. - JustABeginner1yrReplied to CustomFireblastDrawing the Black and gold double-edged sword, with a crescent-shaped ring pommel, I took the first stance. It was oddly comfortable and my body moved without strain.
- JustABeginner1yrCommentedCh 8 Chapter IV: Mortal Reinvigoration (2)
- JustABeginner1yrCommented
Darksword Oslo
By changing the properties of materials on an atomic level, my blades were light and strong. They could pierce through rock with enough bend to keep it from breaking. My sword was forged as a two-handed long sword called, Darksword Oslo. - JustABeginner1yrCommentedLike the life of an emperor, the journey was smooth and without hardships. After plunging into the sea, we followed Ulla's map and descended upon Rehab's layer. Within the dark ice layer, Thyri conjured torches, and we made our way to the inner sanctum. A place filled with treasure scattered about and surrounding a slumbering blue scaled dragon with four fined limbs on his snake-like body. Its head was large, and its eyes were like the center of a volcano. It had a single horn on its head that marked the beginning of countless horns on its body.