Darklord161323
Writing
of reading
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Is it that bad?
I’m pretty sure I changed it, I honestly don’t know why it keeps reverting to the old version. Although I suspect it’s to do with me writing on different devices and the chapters then reverting back to the original form as I didn’t change it on both. So sorry about that
?
It’s fixed
Yes, no Asia
This is a fanfic do I need to say anymore
Nothing, he’s just gonna have Siegfrieds Twice Critical Critical instead
No
Wrong one bro
Already on it, I’ve been slowly try to ironing out any inconsistencies and have been going through the chapter and editing any mistakes. I think Ive fixed most of the wrong things so you shouldn’t notice any things like Senjutsu being mentioned anymore. Im still fixing things like grammer and spelling though which should all be done before the next chapter.