Shurin

calm down riley ross

the goat

someone get this man google maps

whoa whats with authors obsession with virgins....

This might (?) be the first time I ever give a novel 5/5 stars but it’s sooo well deserved. Writing quality: sure minor English mistakes but the sentences are always so elequent and well structured! Character design: literally not a single badly written character whether minor nor big. Protagonist: I started this novel because I thought it was about a villain (evil) and when I quickly found out that wasn’t the case I was initially disappointed since I ALWAYS stay away from self sacrificing saviour syndrome characters they give me the ick but the mc here just draws one in and you root for him and feel his pain. I still often found myself saying “they’re not worth all this trouble idiot” but it didn’t make me angry as it usually does it just gave a protagonist I don’t usually read World building: I would say it gives the right amount. It’s not a huge game of thrones typa world building but that’s exactly what I like because honestly sometimes authors just be yapping… Tragedy: don’t (DONT) read if you can’t handle tragedy because it’s basically the root of the story. But it’s not one of those ‘no progress just sadness’ stories. Sure it’s time loop so essentially it kinda is but the mc, the world, the side characters etc all develop very well and feel real🙂‍↕️ Thank you author for fuiling a guilty pleasure genre and trope I love! Sad to see it end

I feel disappointed in myself can I even call myself a fan… you most likely don’t recognise me and I also disappeared from this site for like four months but this novel has been so fkn good. I still haven’t read near the end because I’m too broke so I’ve been slowly unlocking with coins or fast passes but when I get there I shall write in detail how amazing it is! On another note I’ll also now go write the review I promised and author I hope you write another tragedy some day because you’re so good at it!!

Please don’t lose courage author. The rankings are good n you must remember this is still a new novel. You’re just so fast at updating it doesn’t feel like it, but it hasn’t been out for long. I wonder if there’s some great trick authors can do to promote their story… You didn’t ask for my advice so feel free to ignore, but if I found this novel today and read the beginning of the description I would look at it and think it was some generic revenge story. It’s not a bad description at all and it’s fitting when you know the story, but the first few lines do resemble the description of those typical transmigration revenge stories, which could maybe turn off people. That would be a shame since this story is anything but generic. But I hope you don’t lose hope because I’ve been on this app for almost a decade I think and this is truly one of the best stories on here, and also one with a very unique concept. For now I’ll what I can by writing a review, which I should’ve done a long time ago…

At the beginning when there were few chaps I thought “this backstory can’t possible take many chapters and if it does it’ll become pretty boring” but now I’m here hoping it drags on for as long as possible because seeing everyone’s reactions is like a guilty pleasure haha

randomly seeing u here but why did u drop your book

Author I don’t know how you write this story without getting depressed…