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JesusFreakk2yrCommentedCh 13 13- ACCIO- JesusFreakk2yrCommentedCh 11 11- Lessons from vampirism
- JesusFreakk2yrCommentedCh 10 10- The races of Skyrim
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The pace feels good, if you accelerate a lil bit more it's going to ruin the good vibe that is right now... So please, acommodate youreself with this pace and fill in with more details and a bit more of slice of life (for the sake of us getting to know better the other characters!) Anyway, great fic! Just needs some revisions cuz there's been some grammar mistakes here and there.
Ch 4 4- Getting 'Trained' - JesusFreakk2yrCommentedCh 1 1- Owning it when you name it
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No need for an MC that doesn't fit in the plot of ASOIAF by being an ultra powerful warrior/mage dragonborn who would stomp over any and all... Better be it realistic and fitting for how dramatic, cold and "real" (even with magic and dragons) Asoiaf can be... In addiction, I find you fic to be extra good, the flow , the uality and the overall plot is amazing! Don't change the way it is, because honestly, it is fitting rather well in the mega plot of Asoiaf itself... The mc not being an ultra powerhouse makes that even better... (Even though, compared to the norm, he still is a powerhouse).
Ch 24 Notice - JesusFreakk2yrCommented
whadya mean
"We've also have conflicting reports stating that there have been at least two engagements between elements of the Guard and the Blood Ravens, who own the cruiser." - JesusFreakk2yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue
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I'm about to cry dude :(
"DAMN IT AFTON! LISTEN TO ME! I'M DEAD ANYWAY, JUST GET OUT OF HERE! I WON'T LET MY FAMILY BE WIPED OUT BY THESE FUCKERS... NOW!" he roars, the Gatling Laser expelling the hot empty Electron charge pack as he shoves another inside. - JesusFreakk2yrCommented
Amazing chap, thanks!
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LMAOOOOOOOOOOOO
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darn it Xd
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Well... That's a rather incomplete explanation and rather shallow xD, but well, it goes for an AI
"Well, to answer your first question, Love is not a feeling. It is an Action. You cannot love someone without doing anything for them. You do something for someone, and therefore you love them. You can say you love someone, but you must show that you love someone as well. Does that make sense?" I ask after my explanation. - JesusFreakk3yrCommented
Congratulations
And after I checked under the loose shorts I was wearing, I can confidently say that everything about me has gotten much bigger. Theo Junior ain't so much of a junior anymore, let's just say that. - JesusFreakk3yrCommented
Please, I beg you, revise your text! It's fulfilled to the brim with incomplete paragraphs and misplaced words
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