The1TrueJessiah

so far my votes on Amanda I like Donna and she deserves some love even if it's on like a side note like oh btw Donna ends up with such and such he's pretty cool. remains to be seen as personalities get more flushed out but as is Amanda for Author MC and I think Melissa and better personality Jin are a good match. granted atm I'm on like chapter 160ish can't remember off the top of my head either way keep up the great work.

doesn't have to be male sun wukong as added note if you feel like running with this.

maybe the classic Sun Wukong reference character in the form of a monkey spirit beast that can turn into a human.

Maybe a shy submissive girl that's secretly a super strong spirit beast tamer that will help the mc if he gets into big trouble. (which Aina will conveniently not let the mc know how OP she is and introduce her as a side Heroine) Cause secret characters in games can be fun.

I can't remember the rinnegan powers but I will say I've never liked the design of them. Just thinking of how they look puts me off of the eye powers.

This is a pretty phenomenal light novel I went into it with a pretty open mind knowing that it was fan fiction and wasn't disappointed in the slightest. It's extremely refreshing how well written it is as far as grammar is concerned and granted I never got more than a couple of episodes into DXD story is pretty good. chapters are as long as about 4 or 5 of some other novels out there the character growth is pretty good someone said mc was a huge cuckold but I honestly don't see it. It's like a huge polyamorous relationship without another guy just 1 dude and a bunch of chicks most of which are into other chicks but that's as far as I'll type you guys should give it a shot and I hope he keeps writing.

gjf

v9. z,h xoh 8u,x

halo.

love your work so far keep it up. I'm interested to see how much if any romance you introduce to this novel(I'd like a decent amount personally but hope for at least some). I'm afraid to offer any suggestions cause I don't want to influence your writing style that I adore please keep it going.