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Ahhh I too understand why.
Negative. Men of culture like our MC only take kingdom toppling beauties as disciples!
Such great foreshadowing. Well done Author!
If someone with power tortures women and children in their free time but is a virgin does that make them not an arsehole? And does someone who takes concubines that willingly fell for him and is a saint when it comes to charity work is automatically an arsehole? I get the author wants to paint MC as a âgood guyâ, but Like others are pointing out, âvirgin = moral manâ is a simp ideology. Thereâ nothing wrong with virginity, but rather than using that as a case for morality as a writer it should be the other way around. He kept his virginity because of his morals, like he didnât do anything because he didnâ find anyone he loved, or he didnât want a relationship based off power or something along those lines. Just a little thing that can improve a story, rather than forcing âMC is a good guyâ to the reader, letting the reader create the opinion âMC does/believes X, wow thatâs noble/cool/admirable, I think the MC is a good guyâ. It makes a difference if you can stimulate the reader to form their own connections and opinions with characters rather than artificially force it. If you want to paint a character to be evil/arrogant/good/charitable/etc. showing it through their actions is what makes them an enjoyable character to follow and is how you can mold your audience to have specific opinions on your characters without telling them thatâ how they should feel about that character.
16YO has mental breakdown, meanwhile Mianmian:
If they donât get together I will never forgive you! â¤ď¸
Mama Is going to need to play the game soon. She needs to meet her future NPC daughter in law.
Most authorS/players would do someThing like that. The author Explained the MC will seem like a noob at times and not do things that would be most efficient because while he may have memories and some knowledGe about Games he has never played them before So he doesnt know how to apply that knowledge all the time. in terms of raw combat mechanics though The mc is very affective as He was previously a cultivatoR. Overall i think its well written imo, great Job Author!
One v one is a must
Hey let the man love. Not like he cant figure out another way to find a massive army. cough cough Won Knight đ
Team Ruby! MaKe it happen author <3
Its in the contract. The players are not actually âSlavesâ The alliance just has to provide True Elite that number of players as labor for 3 years free of charge(essentially slaves). Of course No player Would be willing to do that for nothing, They would juat leave the guild, so as the author explained, The Alliance is compensating Its members for taking on that labor role. If they didnt compensate them the players would leave and they wouldnt have anyone to fulfil the contract (which i assume would lead to their guilds being disbanded or some other penalty) TLDR: The alliance is paying for True Elites labor.