Zorgus
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Zorgus1yrCommentedCh 193 Improvements for the Sector and a Letter from the Duke- Zorgus1yrCommentedCh 191 Cultivator Versus Heavens
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doves should be droves here
It was one thing to be bombarded by many explosive projectiles from the opposing side, but it was another thing to see your own cultivators dying in doves at the hands of the enemy's counterparts. It was the exact moment when the bandits started to seriously lose their morale and began to feel the helplessness of the situation. They finally understood the bleakness of the situation ahead of them. And the unspoken truth that they were going to be slaughtered like animals at the hands of the troop of the Aemilia clan began to set in. - Zorgus1yrCommented
i like this chapter, last chapter’s second half… not so much. It’s not foreshadowing when you tell us exactly what the outcome of the war is. Maybe place the Rubrum Trivia of the afermath if an event where consequences go, after the events. Just a suggestion that would make it more enjoyable to read in my opinion.
Ch 180 Slaying Bandits Left and Right - Zorgus1yrCommentedCh 169 Storm Dragon God’s Descend (Bonus Chapter)
- Zorgus1yrCommentedCh 168 168. The Necromancer, The Dude
- Zorgus1yrCommentedCh 167 167. Two Music Enjoyers
- Zorgus1yrCommentedCh 141 The One Inside the Storm Well
- Zorgus1yrCommentedCh 135 Dance with the Beast
- Zorgus1yrCommentedCh 205 Monster Stampede
- Zorgus1yrCommentedCh 102 102. A Sight To Behold
- Zorgus1yrCommentedCh 97 97. It's A Trap!
- Zorgus1yrReplied to VhinxCh 261 The Double Standard Dog Kicked Out of School
- Zorgus1yrCommentedCh 258 Book a Place for You At the Crematorium
- Zorgus1yrCommentedCh 218 Money For Children
- Zorgus1yrCommentedCh 156 The First Match
- Zorgus1yrCommentedCh 214 This Errand Boy is Too Awesome