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- CosmicPigeon2yrPosted
The moment I started reading this novel I realized it sucks. The story is sometimes intriguing but that's it. The author is the laziest person out there. Like, really! It took him almost 2 months to write ~20k words. Can you believe that? And! He always rewrites the old chapters. Why!?? Can't he just move on? Does he really think that his readers will reread those chapters? What a profound waste of energy... Oh, I remember one more thing. The author always says that he is busy. Then why bother writing a novel at all? Now seriously... I'm busy. xD (23/10/2021) I will update this review when... I'm not busy... Btw, there was a glitch and I accidentally gave my novel a 5-star review
- CosmicPigeon2yrCommented
Maybe it's just me... but I see 'HIV' instead of 'HVI' every time I read that D:
[You found the first animal in Hvisland. Your colonists can hunt them for food or tame them as pets.] - CosmicPigeon2yrReplied to Gaasuja
press 'X' to doubt
Seb grimaced as he looked at Manu and Kat in turn. "I heard, skinship can warm your body." - CosmicPigeon2yrReplied to CosmicPigeonCh 1 1 – Main Menu
- CosmicPigeon2yrCommentedCh 1 1 – Main Menu
- CosmicPigeon2yrReplied to Amanda_Guyton
There are countless ways to write a book. It can be more about the dialogues rather than the surroundings. Then there is the emotional part, chronological, and so much more. You can choose whichever you like. But in the end, it's more like a spectrum :P
Leaving all the bad thoughts behind me, I studied myself in the mirror. My maids had spent hours preparing me, making me look more beautiful than I was. I was wearing a white and golden dress, and my brown hair was combed back beautifully with golden hairpins in the shapes of flowers and leaves. The makeup was perfect, the only problem was the jewelry. They were beautiful but heavy, now that I was wearing a lot of them. I was already feeling weak because of nervousness, or was it fear? I didn't know, but I was feeling sick. There was a knot in my stomach that refused to go away no matter how hard I tried to calm down. - CosmicPigeon2yrReplied to CosmicPigeonThis paragraph has been deleted.
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It's not my turn to play the role of the grammar n*zi. But! It's a fok*n' HORSE MATE! A HORSE! How can I brush it off as if nothing happened? I apologize for my language.
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Horse? What horse? Where horse? When horse?
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Oh, I actually stole someone's comment.
'It's gone! It's gone! My little brother is gone!' He realized in horror. - CosmicPigeon2yrCommented
Such vivid description. It's as if I can tou... umm, never mind. I'd recommend changing it to "his little brother transformed into a little sister". Most readers will understand the meaning. Took me a while to come up with this one :P
He patted the place again and again just to be sure, but no matter how many times he did it, he couldn't feel anything. His penis and balls weren't here anymore. - CosmicPigeon2yrCommented
This one too, unfortunately... But I'm trying my best
Although he was quite satisfied with his life since his job left him with enough free time and money for his hobbies, a small part of him had always yearned for a more adventurous life. Unfortunately, he didn't have the courage to leave everything he had to live this kind of life... - CosmicPigeon2yrCommented
This sounds exactly like me atm
His hobbies were playing video games and reading web novels, most of his free time was spent on these two activities. - CosmicPigeon2yrCommented
Are you reading my future? xD
Song Yang was twenty-four years old. He was working as a web designer in a big company and was living alone in a small apartment. He didn't have a girlfriend nor any real friends, and visited his parents only a few times a year. - CosmicPigeon2yrCommented'What makes you different, makes you special' That statement kept repeating itself in Grey's head, and he started seeing the light in the darkness which he had fallen into. Although a little, it was something that will help him leave his current state.
- CosmicPigeon2yrReplied to SCHWEN
SAVAGE!
"I know my son is the greatest, " Martha looked at Grey lovingly - CosmicPigeon2yrReplied to F_E_X_A
another savage
"Grey, affinity, zero" The Elder announced the result loudly - CosmicPigeon2yrReplied to Ross_Alexander
savage
"Is there a problem with the stone"