Cybergreenwolf
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Your story are great 👍👍 Don't bother with the haters cause even if you make a "perfect" story there will still be atleast one hater.. Just wrote for your own enjoyment. After all if they don't like it so much why don't they stop reading your story and write their own... there is nothing stopping them after all...
Gojo cause the he probably like to troll and abuse people while sukuna probably have superiority complex and probably will be hard to tame to say the least.. Even if sukuna is not hostile to the group as a whole it will totally be too AU then..
Usually I don't really support exposition for character development and prefer going straight to the main story cause most of the time it is badly done but you did great on this and make me look forward to the next chapter for more of naruto and sasuke character development.
I like it cause it will make the story more flesh out. However maybe keep it in moderation so that the story progress doesn't seem to go at crawl speed... Or just increase the length of the chapter... Still it up to you the author, just do at a comfortable pace for you so that you don't get burnout like many author on this site. Will keep supporting you so keep up the good work after all this is my favourite best rwby fanfic[img=recommend]
It fine if it is a short chapter as long as you update author... It quite a nice story and one of my favourite so a new chapter is always welcome[img=recommend]
You probably got hacked... If you don't know who is the owner of the username you probably should change your password man... Goodluck man hope you don't abandon the story it quite good
Quite good and have very big potential. However you probably need to recruit an editor to proofread the story cause the grammar is all mess up but still readable but don't worry author I am not condemning you just giving you advise to recruit editor cause you got potential and talent. Good luck author ☺️
In 2 month you start this story and actually finish it... I don't know what else to say but to congratulate you man. The quality is not even down but one of the best story I actually found in this site... Nothing else to say but wow and hope you make another story so I can check it out later... Peace out dude or dudette... May we meet again on another story review haha... Peace ☮️☮️
I quiet like the premise of this story where mc can chat with other world character and go to other world. The adventure is nice and the relation of mc and heroine is quiet put up together although a bit unrealistic but this is fiction so who care about minor imperfection so yeah overall 4/5 cause i don't really believe in perfection just that i know i enjoy this story.... So as I have keep up to date to the latest chapter is there any recommendations that has similar premises as this story? Really appreciate any recommendations given...
It night here in my country so imma cry myself to sleep then tomorrow when i wake up i am gonna joined the hunt for the story... I am gonna promise you that author... However if someone did beat me in finding this needle in the haystack story treasure hunt do keep me posted for those fellow fan that have a heart anyway... Here my email for drop off stuff xspirit4196@gmail.com