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ShivYansh

ShivYansh

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Author You can contact me on Discord- ShivYansh#4045 Email- yk241143@gmail.com

2019-03-02 JoinedIndia
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  • ShivYansh
    ShivYansh4 years ago
    Replied to blue_phoenix

    Thanks for advice bro.

  • ShivYansh
    ShivYansh4 years ago
    Replied to SirZed

    Thanks for commenting bro. But i think that you should read the story from start or its description. There is two system spirits of system. One is outer system spirit and the another is the one you are talking about core spirit. Well, Core spirit Tian, he was killed in past but this story is not about his revenge. You will know about his story in future. The main character of this story is Tang Xiu who was betrayed. With his Reincarnation, he has forgotten his past memory like every person. In future he will know about his past of heaven world. I am a new writer. i am trying to do my best in writing. I hope all readers will drop their suggestions about this novel to let me know my mistakes. Thanks Readers.

  • ShivYansh
    ShivYansh4 years ago
    Commented

    Thanks for advice bro. This is my first time writing a novel. I will heed your advice for future works. Thanks.

  • ShivYansh
    ShivYansh4 years ago
    Replied to soulla

    Thanks for the advice soulla .

  • ShivYansh
    ShivYansh4 years ago
    Replied to Anish_Kumar_6194

    Thanks bro for reading my novel.

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  • ShivYansh
    ShivYansh4 years ago
    Posted

    Hi, I am the Author of this novel,So i have to be shameless and give my novel full rating. This is my first time writing, so there will be some mistakes friends. If you see any mistakes in novel tell me by Commenting. Also if you like this novel, Please vote few power stones to me. Thanks. I hope you all enjoys reading this novel.

  • ShivYansh
    ShivYansh4 years ago
    Commented

    There will be other characters coming in next episodes. He will gain his memory back and retirn to heaven world in future episodes.

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  • ShivYansh
    ShivYansh4 years ago
    Commented

    Thanks for Comment. Next chapter will be realased in 6-8 hours. After that 2-3 chapters will be realased everyday.

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  • ShivYansh
    ShivYansh4 years ago
    Commented

    New chapters are there. let us know your thoughts about this.