you drop your not my friend

make ivy potter a love interest it sounds interesting and at same time looks like a plausible reason for getting involved in the war

is he gonna marry harrys sister

your comment is very crude only one problem we dont use dollars here so it must be your own family your talking about im only sad thats how you feel

lovely comment lol did you tell your mum she's trash to when she gave birth to you. cause clearly someone should have spat you

stop judging books like this and nitpicking at details its a fanfic poem on world if he wants dog poo pokemon in it who are you to question it

Id love to put this. authors book if you can write better wheres your story

if I could give it stones I would dont end this book

you know author you need to stop cliff hanging us its painful

you would think 4 chapters a day is your limit lol

you have alot of guts to put all your hopes into novels, i can respect that and i hope this novel works out for you.

1st

dont care if your rich make the author write more chapters a day lol

froths like a mad fan* angry at author for not going without sleep

savage cliff hanger

vomits blood dont end it here

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon