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Mordanis2yrCommentedits a nuclear launch key plot twist
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its a minigun
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Nanomachines Son!
Half of the entire Western Army was under the command of "Seven-pointed Star General" Liam Armstrong, and the Army Mecha Infantry Division was one of them. - Mordanis2yrReplied to Just_a_pup
Oh? from one year ago? I will remember this, plus he literally forced her to an unwanted marriage, ruined her college life. And such. But I won't bother any further I've not read what ever this is for a long time now. And as for who I am? how does that concern you? I am a random Self proclaimed author in this app, I have no reason to give you a correct or wrong answer. So tata.
Frankly, it was my fault too. I insisted on marrying you despite knowing that you didn't like me. I always told myself that it's okay, that I would treat you like a princess once we get married and eventually, you would realize my gentleness and would want to spent the rest of your life with me. I've never expected you to like me back, but as long as I am able to marry you and take care of you, I'm grateful and satisfied. - Mordanis2yrCommented
I called it sheds Klee!
As expected the entire prison burst into flames and there was a huge explosion. - Mordanis2yrCommented
Bombs, gremlin personality but still acts cute? this is definitely Klee.
A loli, if you were to be blunt. - Mordanis2yrCommented
Fix this
Everyone recovered from their shock. So Audrey Davis, this trash, had actually defeated the genius girl, Kaki Davis? What kind of magical event was this. - Mordanis2yrCommented
Just makes gun your from the modern world.
"I want to make a new Lunar Arm...A sword. If I want to become stronger, I need a weapon that'll make me stronger. A blade that'll crush my foes to the point of submission...no a blade that'll allow me to kill those who step in my way." I said and made my bow vanish. - Mordanis2yrPosted
I aspire to write as good as you. No amount of words cna describe the nigh amount of satisfaction and use of words this book derives out of me, my reading ccomprehension, your art work is incredulous in all I've read in this site. You have granted me an insight that a hidden gem would truly grant me. I wish you well in continuing this work of Grandeur, and good tidings to you.
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Oh my favorite.
Firstly she served Alex's orange juice and Mrs. Lana's surprise: two plates of ravioli. - Mordanis2yrCommented
Brutal but not something I haven't read before, how mary sue; keep writing.
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If this is your definition of violence, then its mediocre at best, still might be a restriction in webnovel, but keep writing then lest the readers may be bored.
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Fix this . . . one last chance.
Mia opened her eyes and found out that he was in a very unfamiliar surroundings, he looked at her clothes that were so revealing and covered his two melons, as she tried to remember what happened to her and how the hell did she get here. - Mordanis2yrCommented
she her female! gahhh
Meanwhile in a room of a big mansion Klyzer can be seen hiding his face between his palm with his red cheeks, as he remember what happened earlier while thinking about it she thought ' Is he going to wait for me in the game, and is it really true that he is just level 1 and just start the game, so it means that he is a genius but why did he talk like that with Ron without any hint of fear in his eyes' - Mordanis2yrReplied to TheUnknownEntity
Fix it then before proceeding with the next chapter.
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Can you please edit and fix your novels?
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"Because you are a fool of a took"
Why was it that no matter how well she spoke, no matter how right she was, no one would listen to her? - Mordanis2yrCommented
Wait is that a DMC reference?
"Then here I come... [Fox Art: Trickster]!" Instantly Kiliffia turned into an array of leaves and shot towards Instructor Mills. Instructor Mills was very surprised at Kiliffia's talent. Unfortunately for Kiliffia, Instructor Mills had fought many from the fox race, so this small trick was nothing to him. He easily sidestepped each of Kiliffia's attacks with a three step motion. It seemed as if he was like a ghost with how he could easily avoid the attacks as if they were nothing. Even with how fast Kiliffia was going, she still could not land a hit which was beginning to aggravate her. But she knew she needed to keep a calm heart and not let herself get upset, or she would end up as she did before. - Mordanis2yrCommented
Ahhh fucj ah my eyes wall of texts make sure to add spaces between the periods.
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Oh oh sh#t its a phoenix is that you Kiara takanashi?
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