Aledamonkey
Coiling, seething, jelqing. Pull off your skin. Richard Richard Richard Richard Richard Richard Richard Richard Richard Richard Richard Richard Richard Richard Richard Richard Richard Richard Richa...
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Aledamonkey6dCommentedThat's it for the introductory chapter. I will be adding 14k words for early rankings entry and will delete any reviews which complain about it- it's not an unfair advantage, it's a loophole, one I intend to use one hundred per cent.- Aledamonkey11dPosted
Do not read this. This is basically some dude crying and pissing himself every single day of his life, he's a SI in name only, he doesn't make use of his knowledge, he doesn't try to improve his situation, he does nothing, this is pure distilled angst, horrible read. Final grade - 1.8 writing quality - 4 (Well written) story - 1 (Unbearable) character design - 1 (Pure garbage) updating stability - 2 (It used to update I guess) world background - 1 (This is just naruto, this is the plot of a secondary character's life, nothing changes)
- Aledamonkey11dCommented
Stop living.
Now, here he was. A monster that followed every order of the village. Where was his freedom? He never had it. Status of being Jinchuriki or one of the Seven Swordsmen? It meant nothing. There wasn't a moment where his opinion mattered. Not a moment where his voice could reach anyone. It was just a lie. He was fed lies his whole life, and before he realized it, he started lying to himself, too. - Aledamonkey15dReplied to SungJinMori
This probably wasn't revealed by the time the story was written
Jewelry Bonney gave Blackbeard a coquettish look, brimming with femininity. - Aledamonkey1mthCommentedCh 26 Reverse Flash
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I like this, hopefully this doesn't fall into overused tropes later on but I find this story interesting. The writing quality is very good 5/5 The story updates frequently as of now 5/5 The story is going somewhere and is interesting 5/5 The MC is capable and likable and other characters tends to be fleshed out 5/5 The world background seems promising 5/5
- Aledamonkey1mthCommentedAlthough I feel guilty doing this, I need all the publicity I can get. Throw stones on me if you like the story so we can get in the rankings. I have more than 15k words stacked in Patreon so join there if you want advance chapters : Emmanuel_Capricorn. Thank you for your understanding.
- Aledamonkey1mthCommented
It's 2000 mana per hour, not per minute. It's 33.33 per minute.
From 2000 points worth of mana per minute, he had managed to reduce it to about 200 points per minute. However, in exchange the power was reduced but even so, it can allow a capable E-rank to combat against a B-rank monster with little to no help. - Aledamonkey1mthPosted
- Aledamonkey2mthCommented
Breeder(Advanced) is funny.
Skills : Aura, Breeder(Advanced) , Chef, Pokemon item(shop) ] - Aledamonkey2mthCommented
When a downgrade calls itself an upgrade
[Ultimate Eye: Able to see into the future for 2 seconds. Cooldown of 15 Seconds] - Aledamonkey4mthReplied to QuantumSt1ck
That is just not true lmao, and even if it was I'd read the other story with this intro a few months ago, way before this author's other story was posted.
I awoke to find myself on a stage made of pure white marble. Blinding lights shone down upon me from somewhere above me that I couldn't make out. The harsh light made it so that I couldn't see anything beyond the edge of the marble stage. It was like there was a dark veil hiding what lay beyond the stage, but I did pick out the shadowy forms of creatures there. I say creatures because their outlines looked somewhat human but with more appendages or maybe even wings in the case of one shadowy figure. Whatever the case was, I knew that I was in an unfortunate position. What made things even more confusing was that I knew I was dead, and I hadn't believed in any sort of god or afterlife.