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Harmless0610dCommentedSo many questions
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I know english is weird, but "pasif" is spelled "pasive"
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Reasons is said twice.
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Books Good though
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Hey author, can you please fix the grammar here.
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+1
2. Delete the multiverse idea and return to the point where Genji is thrown into the portal and continue on from there in the Avatar world. - Harmless062mthCommented
Ha ha, he's Fat
"Fat... father." - Harmless062mthCommented
Jin is better. It lets readers not get confused
[I was thinking of changing his name from Jin to Sam but I realized that some of you might not like that so I refrained myself from doing so and stuck to Jin instead.] - Harmless063mthCommented
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After all, the threat of Voldemort was looming and Harry was to arrive at Hogwarts next year. Having a student helper alongside Harry would be incredibly beneficial to Dumbledore especially one with my prowess. He might even get me to look after Harry throughout the years I'm here or in his own manipulative way, push me towards Harry hoping I gain a friendship with him that seems 'natural'. The thing is though, I have no intention of falling under his wing and following his ideals. His actions caused too many people to die just because he was too scared to truly end his opponents, taking a non-lethal role in fights. Whilst I would need to cross the bridge of actually killing a person when it came to it, I was resolved that I would kill if it I deemed it necessary in my own mind. TLDR: Me + Dumbledore = conflict in ideals. - Harmless063mthCommented(Is this good? I didn't want eyes like Gojo)
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Not ganna lie, but i thought this was Orochimaru
Snake Woman- Medusa (Soul Eater) - Harmless066mthCommented
Chill man Multiversal world travel is great The whole point of universe hopping is to meet new people and interact with diffrent storylines
Phelio: I will stack more chaps for a bit. With my friend help it should not take too much time and Suillvan would go to DxD world soon. - Harmless067mthCommented
Red hair for the win
"So the effects have started. That's good for me; I'll be more handsome than before. Hehe, [an~ narcissistic bastard.] - Harmless069mthCommented
Me like
The black man smiled and replied mysteriously trying to create suspense. "The Elder Scrolls: Warcraft!" - Harmless0610mthPosted
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World building is the generic over used fantasy but has a few points that set it apart from common fantasy. The first couple of chapters are too long and leave the readers confused as they are info bombed. The story development is great with a unique main character. Updating stability is good but the novel still has less than 50 so that could still change.
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