BhupendraGanvir
hey i m a 16 years old boy studying in medical course and its my 1st time writing novel and thank you for your support in future
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๐๐๐๐ he recognised Jessica and bea , wow
i think , author , u make a little mistake here , check last 2nd line , u write ," less than more than " back to back . again recheck it , Thanks ๐ (and soory if u feel bad that i picked out the mistakes )
nice as always "what if the jealous fans attack us / kill us " this was cool ๐๐ผ๐ผ
wow*** purple hairs ๐ so cute ๐ผ๐ผ
Jessica's mom was little irritated i guess, that was a good part i enjoyed it ๐ผ๐ผ๐ผ
๐ผ๐ผ๐ผNice Every sentence is written in good way and i am happy for Jessica and Bea ๐ผ๐ผ๐ผ
๐๐ that' was a sweet chapter and Jessica's parents are as strict ad mine
woww ๐ผ๐ผ that was a nice Chapter and the way you are writing the sentences is so good ๐ผ๐ผ