

hey i m a 16 years old boy studying in medical course and its my 1st time writing novel and thank you for your support in future
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πππi think i m still in the main character of that novel
ππππ he recognised Jessica and bea , wow
i think , author , u make a little mistake here , check last 2nd line , u write ," less than more than " back to back . again recheck it , Thanks π (and soory if u feel bad that i picked out the mistakes )
nice as always "what if the jealous fans attack us / kill us " this was cool ππΌπΌ
wow*** purple hairs π so cute πΌπΌ
Jessica's mom was little irritated i guess, that was a good part i enjoyed it πΌπΌπΌ
πΌπΌπΌNice Every sentence is written in good way and i am happy for Jessica and Bea πΌπΌπΌ
ππ that' was a sweet chapter and Jessica's parents are as strict ad mine
woww πΌπΌ that was a nice Chapter and the way you are writing the sentences is so good πΌπΌ
hey girl your writing is stable π I mean perfect I m just on 4th Chapter and iit's getting interesting I mean wo***ww ππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ good luck my friend , I hope this novel gets so famous I am cheering π£π£π£ for you from here