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Naviation

Naviation

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    Naviationa year ago
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    The story idea is good . The writing has improved a little. but a few huge inconsistencies are a bit problematic. N1: how come everybody just accepted the fact that they just switched worlds. not even one character missed his family or his hometown. Also how old is wilhem he was 7 at the begining but we dont how muchttime passe from then is he 37 because he fought in the 30 years world or more, it's pretty important info that is missing or i missed it maybe. there are othert issues but i don't to be too negative it's still worth giving it a chance.