Relax, it was sarcasm—no need to be aggressive. And regarding space, with his financial standing, he could buy an area isolate it, and create a harsh environment for survivability training. But if going to the planet's orbit is to test his strength then it's understandable, but if it is to test if he can use his powers and survive there or not, I find it foolish. There's basic knowledge. With enough understanding, you can learn most things about space and how the situation will play out regardless of whether he has a strong body or not (strong to what limit? Only physically strong? What is his temperature limit? Radiation protection) etc. There are many factors. And those things I mentioned, could be put under a test it on earth and counter measurements can be prepare before going there. Simple by ordering a space jetpack he could have solved the problem with drifting away. If it's not plot armour, then what is it? (and I'm not saying that plot armour is bad, after all, it's a story, not real life) Kind regards,

Sorry if you found it unpleasant, didn't want to offend you. Kind regards,

He might want to study science or at the least, basics.

Pff, lmao.

Perhaps you don't understand what is light and what is dark.

We do have theoretical proof that the universe isn't 50% darkness. The explanation regarding it with all the formulas will be very long, that's why I don't want to explain it since it will take at least an hour to write it down with links to various sources. If you learn astronomy, you will understand it, if not, it will take a while to explain from zero.

And about your other work, in early chapters grammar and conversations are bad, I forced myself to read it up to the time when he met the general and showed him gold etc. But it can't compare to this work, not even close, it needs some good editing and rewriting in some parts. I understand it is your 1st work, and the main character resembles you but that's not an excuse when you ask others to check it out.

No shit sherlock, use your brain when you go reckless mode. Not only did you not explain what you were about to do, but you also didn't send her home. It's also very convenient from the 'System' to not say the exact time of their teleportation. I bet it already knows when they teleport but not telling him. Why can't he ask the dragon to tell them about his story so that they won't send an escort with him? I get he is naive, but can he also be this stupid? In the worse case, you can bring her back and tell her to go away, cause you will teleport to another place, and return after some time. And about that mating with the strongest, if he has no feeling for her, why give her false hope? Is this a harem novel or?

It will take too long to explain; I might do it when I get more free time.

Neither of you is right.

If you want, I can explain in detail.

But it might be true in your universe.

That's not true, there is no 'absolute darkness' in our universe, no matter how dark something is, there is always light,(particles).

Ah, it's also explained here, I didn't read it yet.

I don't think this counts as a betrayal; she only had to look over him for some time. I'm not sure if they became friends or how the Cosmic treats Evin, a friend or a business companion? And even if it's a friend, did they say that they would die with each other, or bet their life to save one another? I bet if Evin had the chance to save himself by escaping, but he wouldn't be able to take anyone with him, he would do that. Why die with someone who you can't save? But when you can save yourself? You will be able to tell the story to their family and maybe revenge them if you had a feeling of comradeship or treated them like family. Also, I don't get why to make such a big meeting instead of acting as fast as possible. That base is probably gone already, and they are relocating it to another location, erasing all the evidence and going into hiding.

If he needs to save Evin, Kena should do that as fast as possible, or even better, just put in in a frozen state somewhere so that he can't die and go for that base. The chance that they already know about it being discovered is high. If the oath is so good, I would put a function against soul search or when you die you get notified about who and where the one died was.

The chance of Kena interfering was small, maybe 1% 0.5% what was their speculation? But even that chance was high enough for them to consider attacking Evin somewhere else, now their location is known, or even worse, what Kena saw might be more. How did they manage to last for so long, when you have morons as your subordinates.

That's why you should make a plan if you don't want to **** up all the other people you work with. They knew that he was there, they had the information about his group, why are they so stupid to attack near the city, wait for them to leave, go somewhere far. You don't need to fight the whole group, only to kill Evin and that skin shifter, so with patience, you will have an opportunity to kill them sooner or later.

I've turned my brain off at this moment.

They probably have their souls marked, and when they die, it will go back and take a new body, or something similar to that. Or he means something else.