

Arumi T. | Discord Timur B.#5369 | Doing editing and proofreading, | Meanwhile writing a book, slowly but with passion.
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Relax, it was sarcasm—no need to be aggressive. And regarding space, with his financial standing, he could buy an area isolate it, and create a harsh environment for survivability training. But if going to the planet's orbit is to test his strength then it's understandable, but if it is to test if he can use his powers and survive there or not, I find it foolish. There's basic knowledge. With enough understanding, you can learn most things about space and how the situation will play out regardless of whether he has a strong body or not (strong to what limit? Only physically strong? What is his temperature limit? Radiation protection) etc. There are many factors. And those things I mentioned, could be put under a test it on earth and counter measurements can be prepare before going there. Simple by ordering a space jetpack he could have solved the problem with drifting away. If it's not plot armour, then what is it? (and I'm not saying that plot armour is bad, after all, it's a story, not real life) Kind regards,
Sorry if you found it unpleasant, didn't want to offend you. Kind regards,
He might want to study science or at the least, basics.
Perhaps you don't understand what is light and what is dark.
We do have theoretical proof that the universe isn't 50% darkness. The explanation regarding it with all the formulas will be very long, that's why I don't want to explain it since it will take at least an hour to write it down with links to various sources. If you learn astronomy, you will understand it, if not, it will take a while to explain from zero.
And about your other work, in early chapters grammar and conversations are bad, I forced myself to read it up to the time when he met the general and showed him gold etc. But it can't compare to this work, not even close, it needs some good editing and rewriting in some parts. I understand it is your 1st work, and the main character resembles you but that's not an excuse when you ask others to check it out.
No shit sherlock, use your brain when you go reckless mode. Not only did you not explain what you were about to do, but you also didn't send her home. It's also very convenient from the 'System' to not say the exact time of their teleportation. I bet it already knows when they teleport but not telling him. Why can't he ask the dragon to tell them about his story so that they won't send an escort with him? I get he is naive, but can he also be this stupid? In the worse case, you can bring her back and tell her to go away, cause you will teleport to another place, and return after some time. And about that mating with the strongest, if he has no feeling for her, why give her false hope? Is this a harem novel or?
It will take too long to explain; I might do it when I get more free time.
Neither of you is right.