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Because of time travel, this probably about Zald.
well this Issei is mc childhood friend, so he probably smarter than his canon counterpart
Hassan of Serenity is female
using Rule Breaker on someone is not gonna make them drop dead, I don't understand his hesitation for using it, if it's something that can kill than I will understand but Rule Breaker doesn't kill.
Please stop using an AI to improve the quality of your fanfic, it's only make the quality worse. Because they will make a poetry of it and use bunch of meaningless word to describe something that should have been simple as a crystal ball(without any magic or mystery whatsoever) to something that divine being desperate to possess. If you want to use an AI, it's best to using it to help write The first encounter with a beautiful woman, but not the second, the third nor the 4th encounter. you can also use it to help writing Lemon or Smut. But don't use it to improve the whole chapter, because it's just gonna make it worse.
It's getting annoying.
She is literally one of four leaders of the devils race, even if he has a potential to be a super devil, he currently only third son of the phenex family not even a heir to the family. so he can't really do anything about her, for now at least. In the future, it's entirely different story.
Ace the sword or Ace the person ?
Alternate universe exist, so no paradox
Overpowered for dxd maybe, but if he go to Tensura, DC, Marvel, Dragon Ball or any cultivation world he pretty weak
Idiot, Ban regenerate from having his body being destroyed within minutes. Adam definitely doesn't have that kind of Regen speed, and he call it useless, is he stupid or what ?
That is not pride or arrogance, that is what I call Stupidity, After all one better than nothing at all.
The big three One Piece, Bleach and Naruto ?
Essence of Blank altered the user body and soul to have limitless potential, so he should able to handle infinite numbers Authority or any other power. why are you nerf him so much ? Essence of Archmage supposed to altered his body/soul to have big amount of energy, but you make him only have low class level of magic with an excuse of his young age. If you want him to progress slowly from weak to strong then don't give him even 1 Essence, let alone 3.
Intense emotion do not only mean anger. it can be joy, sadness, jealousy or even desperation
if he need 4 years to reach ultimate class, then its big nerf, canon Cao Cao is Peak Ultimate/Low Satan class in kyoto arc, if the mc with 3 Essence is not minimum Low Super Class in 4 year I say its a nerf.