Chris Hansen walks in, “Hey how are you doing?”

I loVe her

Fbi open up

Lol i really cant wjgb this girl🤣🤣, She’s like; ‘i wasnt very smart in my past life,” Girl, ans youre still not ak smart now🤣🤣😂😂😭

Author, you’ve worked hard... But you need to hire a english speaking editor because your sentences sometimes don’t make sense.

When she came of age, when she- author, is there a sentence missing to explain the rest? As it is now, it doesn’t make sense.

What they did? Author, being ambiguous in the narrative of your character like this makes us wonder why she feels the need to repay her parents for doing what was expected of them by bringing her into existence in the first place. Unless they’re not her real parents🤔🤔?

I think that it might sound better to say “-to be made use of- to the fullest.” But thats just me! You dont have to change it author! Its Hard work wRiting!!

Lol i take it back. It doesnt matter shes entertaining to read about. shes like a train wreck

Why is her inner narration so strange? She sounds deranged. (And not quite clever.)

Like, I wanna study her you know? Write up a ten page dissertation on this wench.😂🤣 You did a really great job creating this character. She’s a creepy, masochistic fangirl, but you gave her enough nuance to make us believe that if we stuck in long enough, she would eventually act like she held a single braincell. She’s compelling.

I’m honestly only reading to get to a bad end for this nasty fan girl

This mc is honestly so pathetic. It’s impressive that as an author you’ve upheld such consistency with her original character introduction. This Mc was the sort of girl who can explain away her affection for an abusive character by framing her affection as just so called appreciation for a so called “Intricate background.” When really, they’re just a bunch of smarmy, self entitled, unstable serial killers in the making with a pretty face. From her narrative, this mc explained how she liked them just because of that. They werent real. But more than that, they were attractive, and it stoked her own ego to imagine that she could hold the attention of such a thing. I like how you portray her hypocrisy in her interactions with the characters around her. How in her spoken narrative, she seems off putted, angry, frightened, but then when it comes down to choosing her own safety or continuing to hold their attention- She always, always backs down in submission and somehow, as an author, you manage to give her a sense of smug satisfaction right afterwards. Seriously impressive. She’s one heck of a fan girl I’ll give you that. A yandere herself in the making how she manages to fool herself into believing she’s doing her best in trying to escape the men who would confine and abuse her if possible.

Oh please. You know you love it otherwise why do you persist in indulging these psychos🙄🙄

But you forget that the author introduced this character as a quivering m in denial. Worst yet, this mc has her delusions of grandeur validated by being transmigrated into an otome game, where she can live her power fantasy of ; ‘Transforming the bad boy w/ my good girl heart~~’

So GO to the fuxking police wHen he does try to assault you. I mean, the japanese police are notoriously ineffectual though, so i can understand your misgivings, but at least have it on record somewhere right?! And considering that Ryu had a ****ty scum for a father, even if his mother had battered wife sydrome and never reported him, I refuse to believe that such a violent man hasnt assaulted someone he couldnt gas light into not reporting him. Japanese society loves to blame the kids for the parents mistakes, fucking take advantage if it and stOp trying to act like you’re above them.

THAnk you for finally saying it! Omigawd, I’M invested in this quivering masochist of an mc now so I’m going to continue reading, but she is honestly so so stupid and pathetic

They have spongebob square pants in this verse?!

There’s an idea, just pit them against each other so they don’t cone out to harm innocent people.

Should’ve thought about that before you decided to be civil towards a shameless personality like a yandere ah.