Concor_Corcoran

To be honest the plot is simply a general version of most other stories. The Golden Finger doesnt really make sense and for being powerful super cliche. Also from reading to the latest chapters, the story seems to be partly written with some type of AI software and seemingly partly edited.

Doesnt make sense in numerous points, He chose Herbet but became Brion, Was the eldest brother of Missy, except her name is Byron. This chapter is all over the place.

Love the hulk. Defiantly explains his actual personality. All he ever wanted was to be left alone to smash things.

so looking forward to more of this

Not actually sure what the point is at this point. is it going to be the same pattern, each time? Even the file was wayyy beyond what the us would do as if it was ever found out that goverment is screwed and even if a head of department is backed by a powerful family they arent dumb enough to do what that defense chap has done and get that deeply screwed.

To be fair nato is getting a bloody good dea, at 10.5billion for totally secure networks. The fact they are paying already makes them better than our own world lol

love the marshmello suit lol

To be fair it makes sense that other companies will try to edge him out, but on the other side its coming across alittle forced. Hes seemingly gone from a future knowing forward planning characture to suddenly seeming to forget about the very things he collected in the future. How exactly didnt he realise nintedo would come back swinging like they did? And whats worse is he still has the better system, all he really needs to do is put some time in and swipe some games like he did the movies and use his choas code to get ahead again. It really does seem to be a section where hes hobbled to try and bring some historically correct sections into the story. Still enjoying though

One thing thats a little nitpick is i think the focusing on the movie distrubtors is a little two straightlines. From the previous chapters and actions the idea that companies such as warner and mgm are seen as a challenge seems a little simple, Creed is becoming what disney or marvel is nowdays they are in comparison to the companies mentioned a whale to a tuna. As its obvious that unlike the other movies, topgun will have toys, games and such come out like back to the future. It really is in a different ball game to many other films. Im just hoping its not going to become a loop of repeated plots, make movies-confronted about movie- release movie- critisized about movie- others try to outcompete- make toys/games - profit and then repeat as it would become pretty stale very quickly.

its a farm house built in the 13th centaury with 20 acres that in those times was a landed knights sized estate, and it sounds like it comes with the village. As for estates it depends on where and which country. Techincally everyone has an estate usually the term is used to write wills and descendant inherit an estate normally houses or moneys.