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Kywon1yrCommentedHe probably has the power to see the future. not really 'calculating' if you ask me.
This meant that the young man had simply calculated everything.- Kywon1yrCommented
Death is also a form of incapacitation
"I didn't want this," Alex said slowly. "I didn't want to kill him. I only wanted to incapacitate him." - Kywon1yrCommented
Mr. God here should retire. 'Cause he's going to be doing this for all of eternity.
"And then. And then! And then you always say the same fucking words! You always say 'excuse me'! Can't you say something else for a change?! Can't at least one of you guys say 'hello' or 'good morning' or 'fuck you' or just ANYTHING else?!" - Kywon2yrCommented
Wow... Interesting 'sword' reference
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'Now that I think about it, I feel like I'm floating. ' If you floating, you are free from gravity, not pressure. (pressure is the amount of force you are applying to a unit area) I think I will stop editing here. You can try Grammerly or hire an editor.
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'I can't* even feel my eyes.' can't means 'unable to' / 'cannot' don't means 'prefer not to'/ 'do not' Example: I can't drive means: I am unable to drive. I don't drive means: I prefer not to drive. I'm not sure what you're trying to say for the second part. Are you trying to say 'How am I seeing'?
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'The darkness is all pitch black' is not a sentence someone would say. Someone would probably say, 'Its too dark', 'Its completely black'. If you want to keep the original meaning, you can say: 'No, it's too dark to be night. There's not even moonlight'
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*quiet Running sentences makes the story harder to read. And it is very easy to correct a running sentence. Just add full stops and commas
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These are questions. Start with a question word. End with a question mark. 'Did I wake up? Why is darkness all I see? Is it still night?'
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bruh... You need an editor.
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Really? You can't tell from the cover?
You can't even imagine how disappointed I was...! - Kywon2yrCommented
Wait. This is a reverse harem game. I wonder what breathtaking scenes are you talking about...
There were many masterfully crafted events with breathtaking illustrations that helped the player stay immersed in the story... - Kywon2yrCommented
I'm just happy that you are safe and sound.
A/N: Due to the anti-vaxination mandate happening where I live, I had to move out, as the situation was getting pretty violent. Now everything is fixed and I will be back to the usual update schedule. - Kywon2yrReplied to AnotherAtlas
He probably meant anti- 'vaccination mandate'. i.e. anti mandate for vaccination
A/N: Due to the anti-vaxination mandate happening where I live, I had to move out, as the situation was getting pretty violent. Now everything is fixed and I will be back to the usual update schedule. - Kywon2yrReplied to Melon_Night
I think he means anti- 'vaccination mandate'
A/N: Due to the anti-vaxination mandate happening where I live, I had to move out, as the situation was getting pretty violent. Now everything is fixed and I will be back to the usual update schedule. - Kywon2yrCommentedCh 70 Chapter 70
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I bet *you're laughing your ass off. 'you're' means 'you are' For example: you're mean ( means 'you are mean'), you're laughing (means 'you are laughing') when something belongs to you, you say your. For example: Your phone, Your wallet, Your house, Your ass
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Your sentence needs proper punctuations and Grammer. I can't decipher your sentence at all.
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i.e. be careful of running sentences.
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