SnowofBlood
Mind over Matter
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It's becoming a bit too much anticipation and the slow updates don't quench this unsatisfying feeling from the slow pace. I like the story, your style and plot but I've got the impression to read the same chapter over and over so I'll wait for a big pile of chapters to come back. Thanks for the work, appreciate it ^x^
Thanks for the work. Don't have a lot to say, it's interesting but there's not enough materials to give you a well-thought review so waiting for more on my end :) Write for yourself otherwise it's going to quickly become boring for you I'll say if I have to give an advice
Me neither 🙁
Best idea, be coherent and stay original :)
All the seasons are lame. x)
Hope you're doing well and wish you a fast recovery. The chapters are good, you stretched the Boys arc and developed it well but it is starting to show its limits now. Virgil evolution is interesting, he's more Deva than anything else now, a sort of rebirth I would say. Especially with the cocoon symbolism Thank you for your work.
indeed the plot thickens. Molecular manipulation ? I'm asking myself what new abilities he'll get after his evolution, I guess it should even the physical field between him and Homelander that still exists. But I'm not sure if you're going to make it impact his psy faculties. Impatient to discover it... The slow pace is a double edged sword on this platform however character development is there. Virgil remains the ever constant, unchanging , true to himself. I like this aspect too. Thank you for your work. Ps : You've set the board in this last batch of chapter. Shifting plots, drifting, converging into something. The consequences are going to be delicious to read.