jemgem

omg I just complained about rapist Locke in the last chapter and now he apologizes and talks to her like a proper human being. Better late than never. Good job.

Mediocre story and characters. The ML was fine with the original owner of the FL body dying. He literally says let me know when she is dead. Cold as ice. Once the FL agrees to the divorce he wants, he no longer wants a divorce. He feels 'uncomfortable' that he got want he asked for. Once he is ignored he is like the 5 year old that wants his toy back. The he does every including stalking to get her back. Manipulates what he can to get her to live next door and accept things from him, and to hang out with him. The FL is smart in general but her IQ and strong personality dives into the negative with the ML. For some reason she wants alimony. Even after she realizes she can make money with her friend. I don't understand why she won't just get a loan from her flithy rich friend to live on. Her cooking makes money very easily so she can return the money soon enough. So it's like she letting herself stay attached to the husband for a superficial reason. She herself keeps saying she'll be killed by being around him BUT keeps their relationship going. I don't understand why she does whatever he says and never speaks up about anything she doesn't like. She's always like oh it's awkward, oh it's too late to say something. Insane. Next she'll be like oh I'm already lying down in his bed oh well it's too late to say anything. Either leave him properly or be lovers. So painful to keep reading and I read up to chp 337. I wasted my time.

Boring, repetitive. The voluptuous female character, who is very voluptuous by the way, is so voluptuous that her voluptuous body is constantly commented on. When people make girls with huge boobs that apparently have been training heavily their whole life have GG breasts. I'm always in disbelief, that would be so painful. Murong is pretty much just there for the MC to grope. 🤢 MC is so OP, there is actually no reason to have a number associated with his extraction ability. By chapter 105 it's at 190, one hundred and ninety! times an HOUR. Just put infinite and call it a day. Also there is absolutely no comment of anyones family. Is the MC an orphan? Did I miss something?

I didn't read the synopsis. Good to know that it's written in English but that doesn't change the fact that it is hard to read. A beta reader would help a lot or a better beta reader if the author already has one. With the amount of competition and options out there, why would someone pay for bad grammar and vocabulary?

Same old trope which is fine if it didn't have the typical stalking male lead. Creepy older man basically harassing an underage girl. No apparently means yes. Typical of Chinese novels so not surprised but super cringy and lame. And how the MC is surprised by her period so far when the male lead is around. I also don't understand how the strong female lead is forced to accept the ml thanks all the time. She always gives in or is tricked into giving in. So she's super smart and calculating in everything but the ml and her own body? And how can her period be so unreliable when she knows super Chinese medicine. Regular Chinese medicine can fix all those issues. Readable especially if you skip any scenes with the male lead.

Diana is a step away from baby talk 🤮

🤢🤮 disgusting sister

I've never read something where every single is oblivious and no one has any life skills. I think the only person with a brain is Ragnar.

You're kidding me right? Suddenly 4 million over budget is nothing? I'm so happy I've never met anyone this stupid in real life. The only thing worst than dumb people who do dumb things is a supposedly smart person who does ridiculously dumb things for no reason....(a girl isn't a reason, if she was his pre rebirth wife, sure but they are just strangers who are attracted to each other). At least in his old life he did things for people he thought he knew well.

What is wrong with a girl killing a deer? And why would you be shocked at that in this game where people kill rabbits (probably cute too) at the begining to level up and continue throughout with all kinds of animals and beasts. They've already been playing for several days. How did the boys even level up a all? Did they just go and look for ugly creatures?