Auronos

Noice chap

So, are you going to make him have a big harem in each world, only for the MC to abandon them later ? Well I doubt you'll really make him go back to those worlds or make a chapter about the MC go and see the harem he abandoned.

Wow what a funny chap, and he rly will leave Hinata with Kiba...

Are you really going to leave Hinata with Kiba?

These last few chapters bothered me, you made the MC act like an idiot and then nerfed him, I'm not able to read your story with the same motivation and satisfaction as before, I still don't understand why you did it.

Oh great !

Mais uma ff do cara com fetiche de Netorase,...............................................................................................................................

I think your decision about the pregnancy was too early, but it's your story, you do what you want, I just hope the MC only has daughters.

It reminded me of FMA and I didn't like having to remember it.