the order of the stort is jumbled. i couldn't enjoy the erotica because of the disconnection. please edit first. will come back later. start from: -after 5 years from running away -meeting grandfather -knowing the engagement was never cancelled -reconnection of Ml and villainess -smut

I can't feel the smut mature content because there was no connection!!! wth happened after 5 years?! why are they suddenly married? and why did it jump to 2 months again?!!!!

oh my goodness!!! the plot twists of this story is soooo good

oh my honey bunny. be like Tilly. don't back down.. still hanging to every word of this novel....

omy!!!! you keep making me smile you chapters you!!!!

yay!!! a smart fl at last!!!! sooooo happy!!!!

why am i smiling???☺️☺️☺️ missing my "baby" now...,😘

why am i smiling???☺️☺️☺️ missing my "baby" now...,😘

still loving the story here... please don't change for worse...

still loving the chapter!!!! thank you!

liking the story still. adding to library...👍👍👍

my heart! so good reading a not one night stand novel!❤️❤️❤️ hooray for getting to know each other first

it started sooo good but sadly the author lost her way. way toooo slow. throwing plot twists but not resolving it right away making you antsy because u are still hang up on the previous plot twist when another plot twist is introduced. authors like this are so greedy. wanting the coins for unlocking chapters but still will not give you satisfaction. will, this is my opinion. if you like her style go on then.

if this doesn't jolt fl that she is no longer following the plot, I don't know what will.

i am no longer reading word for word. too many unnecessary characters deviating from the story. please focus on your plot. i understand you are still new and u can still improve. u started brilliantly but you got lost along the way. again it is not about making money (if you are a newbie). it is about establishing your quality. money will come if fans choose you

this is the reason why I like Yunipher villainess. she's lovable, strong, knows what she wants and smart. i hate smart fl's but stupid when it comes to love. i hope in the next chapters Ivy will get better.

way too extreme! no need to use violence to get the girl. tsk tsk

daddy's little girl!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ better and better detail, dearest author,,👍👍👍

i do like the alternating POV! unlike other novels where chapters will pass before we learn what the other person thinks. kudos for doing this!❤️

dear author. i am a cheap skate. i was really satisfied reading free novels on the web. because of this story, for the first time ever, i have signed up and used money so that i can unlock chapters. i am a picky reader. you successfully entertained me with your story... you can take my money, my queen🤗🤗🤗